Loving this story can't wait for the next chapter.

Cool.
Love the unique story premise; fascinating and deep.

Seeing as Jasper/Bella is my eternally favorite pairing, your story drew my interest straight away.

I'm really confused. I'm hoping that will clear up as the story progresses. There are a lot of inconsistencies though. I'm glad you listed each one's curse but it is a lot to follow and I have to keep referring back. How did Edward become a vampire when Carlisle was listed as 1 of only 3? And if Bella was forced to love Edward why was she so easily with Jasper when Edward was by her side when they met? Did Edward recognize Jasper? Bella didn't recognize Jasper.

Nice story. It's like a twist to the fallen series by Lauren kate. Good job.

I don't normally like to read non canon pairings or Edward as the villain, but there's something about this story that intrigues me. Can't wait to see how everything plays out.

Damn girl! This is one brilliant concept. Please update...and soon.