Thank you for such a well written story. I never thought much of this pairing before, but the way you have written them both, they are so cute together. The sad parts were not over-dramatized, just enough to make them realistic and pull at your heart strings. Once I started reading I couldn't put it down until I was done. I look forward to reading Randoki and Rose's Garden. Please continue to write, you have a new fan.

Was truly a wonderful ride. The ending seemed fitting with all that happened and the tone of the story. Really shouldn't have surprised me, just glad Ruby was able to accept her situation. Thought she'd be dealing a bit more on ptsd or the like of something similar with the shooting. Seemed like while Ruby thought about him from time to time and was sad there was no real depth to it or with any real effects to the other characters. Just would have liked to seen a bit more with that but still really liked how you tackled Ruby's and Yang's problems overall.

I think I burned a box of tissues for the last two chapters! Really well done . Thank you for writing this and making my day better!

Mythbusters is the tv show they are watching. I would know, i watch it.

Great final chapter!

Fun idea with a party. Best moment by far was Penny so smitten she couldn't speak properly

Got to admit that I had forgotten about her seeing Jaune and the like it fell off the track with everything else going on.

As for the surgery, I don't think I'm able to grasp her mindset, and that's a bit concerning. I feel like the severity and frequency, as well as specifics, of her hallucinations have not been explored in enough detail to make her decision make sense in light of the risks. In many ways, she seems to live a fully functioning, normal, and successful life even now that Pyrrha's back, and it doesn't mesh very well with the desperation she's pursuing this with.

Neat that she might turn the hallucinations into something positive, as terrible as they are.

Glad Ruby's pushing back on meeting Raven. Everyone being too accepting would've felt a bit too optimistic.

The Yang and Coco make up scene was great, as was her challenging Pyrrha. It's all very Yang things to do.

Oh, she's got something similar to Nora. I wonder if the piece of bone stuck in her head is causing it, or if it's just the mental trauma in itself. Makes me curious about what Nora dealt with.

I guess Pyrrha's inability to control herself makes sense.

I did like that Penny and Ruby talked things over, and the conversation between Blake and Pyrrha felt meaningful.

I must admit Iam left dumbfounded by chapter 11 and this one. I'm not sure what happened, but this is honestly the worst two chapters I've ever read from you. I'm sorry to say this, but there's just so many problems that breaks the suspension of disbelief.

* Pyrrha leaves without telling Yang.
* Pyrrha finds Yang surrounded by empty bottles of alcohol, poceedes to ignore it.
* No one stops her, instead going along with her idea and facilitating its execution.
* Without consulting Ruby, or Yang, a stranger is dumped into the apartment.
* Nobody sees fit to convince Ruby to seek medical attention or at least get a second assessment.
* Ruby know Yang is feeling terrible, proceeds to ignore it. Actually, everyone seems to ignore Yang.
* In the span of one chapter, Pyrra grows completely irrational, abandoning her girlfriend because she had a bad dream. 0 communication between them, which makes so little sense since they've been together for months if not over a year at this point.

As far as feeling suicidal, that's actually alright considering all, but the rest just leaves me scratching my head. It's a real shame, because the stoy had overcome a bit of a rough start.

That was fantastic. First I believed Ruby remembered he was dead but hope, didn't happen.

Nice to see that you're finally fleshing out Ruby and Pyrrha's relationship.

I love how Ruby so casually started talking about Jaune like he was still alive. Comes out of nowhere and throws you for a loop for a split second. It's great!

Visiting their graves was a neat idea and I liked the execution of it.

Yang need to learn about the dangers of drunk driving. In all seriousness though, as worrying a development as her drinking habits are, I do like it. Makes perfect sense and is a good subplot.

I like how you're leveraging Yang's desire to be there for Ruby and help and protect her. The frustration over her inability to do so is very clear. Family and friends hurt to, even if they're not the ones injured.