This story is confusing

Of course she and Superman were dating after he broke up with Lois. Why did even put that in? Just ruined it for me.

And the way that you made Batman brake the 4th wall made me cringe.

And the whole "She's the light to my darkness" nonsense made me cringe again.

I'll tell you what Adels, I get the impression you feel more comfortable with pictures and comics most of the time, but you're a damn fine writer too. Especially if there's a tongue firmly in a cheek...figuratively and literally!

Hang on...I saw no zombies! You told me there were zombies! Are you sure #5 is where I stop? I was expecting Bruce's immortal blood to corrupt folks after some form of transfusion / contact - starting with Mr Creepy-Dude - due to the whole magic shenanigoats... Or something!

You sure I don't go to 6? Can't help but feel that there's SOMETHING else in the pipeline with this...

Are you ready, hey, are you ready for this?
Are you hanging on the edge of your seat?

Because you remember that Queen song? Duh duh duh another one bites the dust. And another one gone, and another one gone, another one bites the dust!

Yes, Adels, I just pulled through part 4 too! Still top shelf stuff this. Really fascinated by the villain. Getting an Incredibles vibe off schler now too! Looking forward to seeing who it turns out to be!

You know that old phrase about buses? Saw it was a shorter one so went for it again. And its good stuff pally! Angsty but with an earned suspense and threat backing it up instead of just for the hell of it. I like it!

Although after that charming use of the word "Drat" during the bonked head bit at the start, I am now convinced the villain is Dick Dastardly!

Well, you did ask for it! And you were right my friend, took me a good while to remember anything about what was going on! Haha

But what can I say! Twas good pally! Especially when a mysterious orange blob saved the day...Aquaman my foot, we all know they were saved by Tangerines!

And now...See you in 18 months!

i will wait for your return

Great story and looking forward to the next update. I'm curious what you have in store for Bruce once he finds out Diana is harmed enough to use said gift you referenced. I'm sure he will be enraged and have plenty of harm to bestow on said villain. Ahem anyway good luck with your future stories and chapters.

what gonna happen to themi already crying pls dont

Great chapter. hmm, I WONDER what's gonna happen to WONDER Woman.
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Awesome update, but that last line makes me soooo sad! :)

I waited anxiously for this update.

This scene was incredibly well described. She is passionate and erotic.

But this end ...
oh my poor heart Wonderbat !

this is good. more story plssssss

This story is very interesting and suspenseful and I really hope you will have more chapters in the future soon since this story is getting good! Keep up the good work man! Hope you will finish making more chapters in the near future soon!