Let's see... I devoured your story all night, and I loved every piece of it ! It really is one of my favourite story ever, not lying ! Juste bad Lapis, and cutie Peri, and they managed, and it all got fast when they discovered the truth ! And Jasper ! And Garnet !
This is so cool ! As I am French, I will only say this : "Je te tire mon chapeau !" (which means that I respect you and your work a lot and I recognise it is a masterpiece)
Thank you !

lapis! noooooooooooooooo!

amethyst like s to steal stuff?

team rockets blasting off again!

Lapis you jackass

What the hell, Author!?Why would you portray Lapis Lazuli as an antagonist!? That is so out of character for her to act like a crazy psycho bitch! I understand that Lapis holds resement towards Peridot for dragging her to Earth, but even she would never ever stoop to this level of a sick sadistic evil she-demon.
Peridot knows what she’s done, but she does not deserve to treated like a poor helpless child that is being abused. I’m sorry but this major out of character portrayal of Lapis is the only thing that kills the story for me.

This was a good story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Sad about the Lapis outcome but understand it. Again I really enjoyed your story. Good luck in your future endeavors. Until next time

That's comment about Leggy now makes Peridot the second youngest Gem in the show since Rebecca Sugar said she was made 6 years before her first appearance.

That make her only 8-years-old.

I'm actually more angry at Lapis now and I'm not that big a fan of her in the first place.

I read till here, which is basically half the fanfiction which took me half a night and a whole morning, because I couldn't wait to finish it. I was ultimately very disappointed when I realized that this is not a slow burn lapidot fanfic as I thought it would be, but a story about a psychopath. The story actually disturbed me, because I was very excited at first when I noticed that there is a lapidot story out there which is actually good written, has good grammar and spelling and the characters (except for Lapis) are all in character (props to you on that.) but I was still disturbed at how Lapis abused Peridot emotionally, psychologically, verbally and physically and I had to stop because it was too much and Lapis showed no emotion and no development. If this is a prank on Lapidot shippers, then you've succeeded but if not, you should change the picture and at least mention in the description that it is not romantic and not endgame in this fanfiction, because it is misleading, and anybody else will think this is a hate-to-love scenario when it is actually hate-to-more-hate. Anyways, this was a disturbing fanfiction that is filled with abuse.

What the fuck is this? I thought this was a Lapidot story by the picture, but apparently not and you just broke my ship. I mean, I know Lapis can be a bitch sometimes, but you made her into a complete and utter PSYCHOPATH.

This is simultaneously amazing and sad, all at once. I can't stop reading, but I'm also so nervous and tense for Peridot at all times! Oh, man, and now Lapis has her eyes on the CPH DVDs. Noooo!

"Phone Me Maybe" made me laugh more than it should have. Lol. )

This story was amazing and I absolutely loved reading it the whole way through! And it was so suspenseful I couldn't even stop reading it at some parts. Your story made me like Jasper, and want for her to join the team... truly amazing job on this!

*hates "popular ship here"a ship, then reads emails*:my avatar

Well Done.
Loved it.
I.. Have Abosolutely NO Words right now.
Except Well Done and GRE-BRILLIANT Job This was a Excelant story and I'm Glad you Continued it to the end and never gave up.

Stay Determined~

Noice