Reviews for The Man Who Became Peace |
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ZenRaven chapter 2 . 4/9 Give him a fire quirk too. It will evolve into scorch or blaze quirk combined with wind. Or maybe lightning i dont care do what you want. But give him a second quirk. Also can you give momo the ability to make an armor of nanobots like Ironman that will be a good use of her ability, also the ability to absorb back what she created so she doesn't have to lose her fat. |
ZenRaven chapter 1 . 4/9 He should have a fire quirk too, to mix it up with wind. That will actually be cool. |
Mutant Type Y chapter 2 . 1/21 I generally like this story but since it haven't been updating in like what 4 years now ,Happy 2020, i feel like this should continue with a pletora of updates and not stuck at chapter 2, nice add on the last bit there i like souma aswell. I think in a year this Fanfiction should be updating more frequently than the past 4 years but anyway that is my take on this a.k.a my review it is great but the updates would leave me hanging for more than i would like. If you don't like my review then just ignore it. Good luck and i hope you do good |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2019 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . s/8663533/2/Team-Zvv |
deathgod22 chapter 1 . 2/25/2018 I hope that you will update this story... It's an interesting story |
soulreapern chapter 2 . 5/17/2017 Please update as soon as you can, Great story! |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/20/2017 Great chapter update soon! |
ExDaGod chapter 2 . 4/11/2017 Update |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2016 I cant believe he just threw aside his mothers balde hahaha i thought he cared about her more then minato |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2016 please make todoroki is naruto rival not bakugo |
anoyak111 chapter 2 . 10/8/2016 Finally a second chapter and love what your doing and also naruto and momo interaction |
dragonjay87 chapter 2 . 10/8/2016 Love it continue please |
becauseno chapter 2 . 10/7/2016 Nice story! Although writing style could be better... I feel that ur brushing through the story too quickly... perhaps you could write from different character's pov and include feelings and thoughts as well... i'd suggest a beta reader/editor to help. Other than that, AMAZING! |
Lightningblade49 chapter 2 . 10/7/2016 Sequel chapter was even better then first chapter, I love Naruto & Momo's relationship they are clearly a couple just one of them has trouble admitting loving a certain idiot. |
Lifke123 chapter 1 . 9/2/2016 Its toooo gooood |