What's this? I'm not crying, you are. Go away.

god, this killed me!; fuck!

This is an amazing fanfic. I'm crying so hard. Thank you.

This is an amazing idea, and is a very good fic.

Okay, wow, I'm crying right now honestly. This was amazing, and heart wrenching, and I just, I can't...

You're a fantastic writer

Man. That got me crying. Poor Ed. Well, at least he was remembered. Man, I feel bad for him. Good job, anyways. If the story can make you cry it's probably a good one.

Wow, sad.

I think I stumbled across this fic in august and was really impressed with the emotional rollercoaster it took me on. I occasionally run out of things I like to read and have to go back and re read stuff until I find something new, and decided to pick this one up again to see if I still liked it. And let me tell you, I cried. Again. Just like last time. I love that Ed didn't make some kind of magical recovery. I like that there was a legitimate amount of heartbreak. I like that people didn't get to say goodbye to him because in real life that's what happens sometimes. I liked how at the end good things really came from a death, in a way that seems realistic.
This story was wonderful and I'm really glad I found it when I did, and that I re read it again. That emotional response didn't fade for me and I applauded your story for having the emotional drive without drowning in angst. It's a good balance. Good job:)

Definitely a tragic story - he's way too young to die, but I love how you turned the tragedy into a victory.

so sad, yet so sweet. perfection!

You good author are so good at what you do that i sat here a my kitchen table and bawled my eyes have such a way with words that its beautiful

I'm not sobbing or anything. T-T.

this is absolutely beautiful

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IM CRYING.
AAHHHHHH

Evil, evil you are.
This was painful to read, but I'm guessing that was the intention.
Why do I feel like this was a vent out (would that be the right word?) for all the sh*t that DIDN'T go down on the latest chapter of the Ishvalan Accords? Because I thought things would have turned out much worse than they actually did there...
All in all, great one-shot. Brings a new perspective on how cruel the extermination was. Ed's bitterness towards the unfairness of it all was heart breaking.
Keep writing, and may you be spared from the Writer's Block~