Just wanted to let you know this is my favorite crosshares fic of all time.

This is a masterpiece.

I am upset, VERY upset, that NONE of this is canon.

The team being overprotective of Velvet. Coco being easily embarrassed. The part about Coco's eyes. The team's overall dynamic. Velvet and Coco's relationship.

Everything.

I am upset that everything about this is NOT canon.

I hate this world.

Amazing and adorable.

This... THIS was bloody briliant!

This is just what I needed. Good job mate.

This needs to be a full story. Like seriously.

I love how Velvet is the dominant one here. Somehow, it doesn't seem too farfetched, considering how comfortable she seems with her teammates. No timid bunny in the CFVY dorm.

AWESOME! Makes me wanna do ANOTHER spin-off where they become one of the most famous - and one of the last - rock bands in the world! GODDAMMIT NOW I HAVE ANOTHER IDEA! F**K!

In most RWBY fics, Velvet is portrayed as the shy one, being pursued by the confident Coco. I really like how you reversed it for this story. The two of them are very cute together.

I need to brush up on my terms; I know what bi is, but I'm not clear on demi.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

D'aww! So kawaii!

Great job! Thanks for writing it! I'm happy to see some much-needed Crosshares love! It was fun to see Velvet being strong and confident, compared to her usually nervous demeanor. It was also hilarious to see the usually-confident Coco being reduced to a stuttering mess.

Great work of art, as usual. I keep meaning to start reading A thorny Triangle again,but i haven't had the time to read such a large story. (that's my excuse, lol) Ill try to read it soon though.

I. Feel. Like. A. Massive. Idiot.

I was looking through your story list, and I start seeing a lot of the stories that I currently am reading. I started to feel confused, I couldn't figure out why I was seeing so many of the stories that I was currently reading.

That was when I realized that you were the author of all of them. I felt so stupid, I should have noticed sooner. The fact I look through your story list quite often just adds to the pain.

Anyways, I'm looking forward to whatever you update next.

Have a good day and update soon!

This was a lot of fun. Cute, fluffy and an interesting take on Coco. Think you got her character down better than the majority of people that try it. She didn't feel two-dimensional, instead there was complexity and depth.

Great little story you have here. It probably has my vote from what i have read so far.