Holy shit man. What happened to you.

Mercykill for the win

I love this story! Please please keep it up! Mercykill is my fav ️

My god , PLEASE CONTINUE , you have SOOO much talent and I can't wait to see the ending!
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Kittykat1845

This is a damn good story. Wish it would have had a happy ending, but then again thats rarely the case. Anyway, hope you update soon

OH NOOOOOOOOO. Very well done by the way (o)

Hi I just read your entire story and I must say everything you have written to this point is leading up to one big thing and I cannot wait to see what happens. The suspense you have generated throuout the story is quite phenamenol. I have a good feeling that chapter 16 is going to be juicy af. I love the fact that you managed to pair up mercy and reaper. At first I was like mercy and reaper ew never in a million yeara. But as I read their potential as a power couple grew expontially. I kinda also have to add that it is blackwatch Gabe and that does help ship them together. My 2 big criticisms is that feel that mercy is being portrayed as a little to weak for my taste. I feel like she's really defensless most of the time. She's not as strong as she could be. And another thing would be that there are still some spelling mistakes. It's not a big deal but at this point its about fine tuning the story. I also have to add how much you've grown as a writter. It's quite impressive to see how your story telling capabilities have evolved and honestly your probably going to be the first writter I officially follow. Keep upthe great work and I exitedly await your next chapter.

Oh boy things are about to go to hell

Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter

Amazing story! Please update soon

DAMN IT REAPER COME ON MAN! Wonderful as always I can't wait for next chapter (o)

YA YA YA YA YA YA YAY. I loved this chapter \(o)/

At the end of chapter 8 when u said she wasn't dead really killed the suspense.

Oh my Morgan Freeman... Mercy is a whore.

Oh Sh t. Oh no.
Please update as soon as possible