| Reviews for Shinobi of the League: Arise of the Heroes! |
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   Rebmul chapter 4 . 12/2/2017 they way you have it labeled it seems like its a Naruto x Diana story they way its written it is definitely a Naruto x hawk girl story |
| J.E.P 1996 chapter 2 . 10/27/2016 I don't know this chapter seemed pretty rushed and shaky, and why just a rehash of the episode in question? If Naruto is powerful, wouldn't that change the outcome of the battles? Instead we got a rehash that was poorly done and the only thing that was done to it was a few pieces of dialogue from Naruto? |
| J.E.P 1996 chapter 1 . 10/27/2016 I think you need to go back to this chapter and properly explain who Sam is. Because you half assed that only giving us a name! Some background would be nice. |
| V01dSw0rd chapter 2 . 10/20/2016 SIGH... Please read over your chapters carefully before uploading them... Even though you intended to remove references to Sonic X, you still say Naruto used Chaos Control in chapter 2... |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/18/2016 Awesome |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 4 . 10/18/2016 Great chapter! I loved it! |
| Of Dragons and Roses chapter 4 . 10/17/2016 My biggest problems right now are that you can't stay on one hero name for Naruto, you keep switching Sage and Maelstrom and maybe something else, and the fact that sometimes you use pronouns more than you should, in reality you should be using the character's actual name. You're a good writer and I like your work, but mistakes like these make it difficult to understand and enjoy. I want you to improve but remember I still like your stuff. |
| Umbra.Venator chapter 4 . 10/17/2016 interesting chapter |
| WhateverPlus chapter 4 . 10/17/2016 great chapter continue please |
| A Plexx chapter 3 . 10/13/2016 The plot thickens! Good job with the chapter enjoying it more with each new one that comes out |
| Jose19 chapter 2 . 10/12/2016 This was a good chapter all around in my opinion now let's see if this rewrite of your original is better than the first one. |
| Umbra.Venator chapter 2 . 10/12/2016 Good chapter, looking forward to more :D |
| watson85 chapter 1 . 10/11/2016 You said in the story that Martian Manhunter has blue skin when in fact his skin is green FYI he shows up in the first season of super girl that is now on netflix. You might want to double check all three of your first chapters I have read the first 2 so far Keep up the good work |
| WhateverPlus chapter 3 . 10/11/2016 great chapter continue please |
| insanemaelstorm chapter 2 . 10/11/2016 Nice chapter. Liked how naruto advised manhunter. Also liked how you included naruto into this arc. Also liked how naruto has been portrayed. Can't wait to read more |
