Oh this was too funny. Such a train-wreck of a situation. I was cackling through the last half, nicely done!

Lol that was so much fun to read! Poor Mustang!

Aah I just re-read this fic and god damn it left me wheezing! Would you be ok if I adapted it into a comic? With credit ofc!

Pretty sure I was doing a fair impression of Falman for most of this; it was great!

Mi gosh this was hilarious

Oh god, this is amazing.

oh God that was so funny! i can literally see it all playing in my head! i love this! kudos for this wonderful fic!

I was cackling at “she’s just giving it away!” “It’s a trap!”

Lol

This had me laughing silly Ohmygod. Great job! I really admire this lighthearted fics of team Muatang with Ed on their days as ordinary people. They're such a lively bunch and their dynamics whether or not they bordered on something strongly familial is really interesting to write about. I'm taking this as canon and no one can convince me otherwise!

lol loved it XD, i'll spell it like 'Koncoosion' from now on lol!

BTW while reading this on my 3DS, i started walking to a different room...i fell over and hit a door, got up...AND MY 3DS WAS STILL OK! ...but then put my 3DS down on a table for a second...just to knock over a glass of water on to it! graahh! then i stepped on an empty soda can my brother left on the floor while looking for a towel!

your fic made me unlucky lol!

my 3DS still works though! (i wouldn't be writing this if it wasn't lol)

-ZeyTheFox-

Welcome back! I've been away from fanfiction for a long while as well.

This little one shot was absolutely adorable. I like how it was just the right amount of fluffy with humor thrown in there. This seems like something that could have totally happened.

You were one of my favorite writers, so I'm glad to see you're here again, and I can't wait to read more of your wonderful stories!

I laughed out loud when Mustang choked his door knob. This story was brillant! Didn't know you were gone but seems good to have you back!

What a lovely reading! It was fresh, it was funny, it made me laugh out loud a few times, i loved this, it was such a great way to comeback after your hiatus! It starts just like any other day at the office, because lets be real, Jean always as to be doing something weird, and it escalates from there. It was great seriously, the ending was awesome, well this entire things was awesome so... jesus, 'raining'... hahah just totally loved this to bits and pieces, and welcome back, i missed your stories! "Say What" appears to be another marvelous job from you! So thank you for writing and sharing this c:

I! Thought! You! We're! DEAD!

Welcome back mirage! Hugs hugs hugs! So excited to see you posting FAlchemist stuff and this was great! Hawkeye was my favorite here. My stone faced favorite.