This was so sad. The plot twist... I wasn't ready for that.

;;-;;;;;;;; cryingg

:)))

I think a piece of my heart broke when Lucy realized she was dead. Other than that, I love this fic!

Damnnnn... I can't comprehend how much I come to love this fic. With all the emotions swirling around the air, I am just loving it more and more. To the love to the angst to the fluff, everything is just on point. Though, I never thought that the children on Neverland or even the grownups; whose child at heart, are dead. Damnnnnnnn, I never thought that that would be the twist. And I love it anyway. And especially towards the end, with all the fluff and warmth happening, I'm filled up with so much fluffiness that I'm melting. Beautifully done and I'm really excited for what's more to come. Hoping for more stories from you.

This is a very interesting concept!
Enjoyed reading it very much!
Must I say, that somehow the image of Peter Pan suits Natsu very much.

*Thumbs up!"

Love the idea of Natsu being Peter Pan and Lucy as Wendy! I would never have thought of this AU but it really intrigued me from the start. As usual your writing is beautiful. The last chapter with Lucy being dead is just heartbreaking. Looking forward to more of your work!

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this was so good ! Lucy is represented perfectly

Ah! I really enjoyed this story! So bitter sweet. I'm just so curious though as to how she died? I really want to know~ Love it! Oh, to get a glimpse into a few of their daily lives in Neverland. I'd eat it up. Great job on a short story. I really loved the ending, too.

This was beautiful! I almost cried! Thank you for giving us this beautiful story omg ;-;

Oh my goodness - I AM CRYING. THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL - MY HEAAAART.

This was so sweet, and sad, and just beautiful. So glad I read this.

How dare you make me cry HOW DARE YOU

Amazing...but so sad I almost cried!