Huhu how very interesting.

I need this fic like I need air :D Keep up the great work.

This is good!

even if this was your first lemon, you manage to make me blush a lot during this chapter.
still i felt bad that this happened to poor reader-chan in front of all the Hench maniacs

I love this chapter! and I don,t mind read some more lemon e_e

Yay! You continuing it! I checked this story everyday and am really happy to see a new chapter. As always, you're really nailing all of the personalities :D Can't wait to see more! As for the lemons...there isn't much lemons with triangle!Bill, so I would love to see some.

read this whole thing so far and i love how ur portraying Bill in this one

also i don't mind some lemons or if not, you can always post it in a separate fic. I say this cause there aint that many BillxReader lemons fics out there ya know? ;)

Wow! I love your writing style! And you managed to pin down Bill's personality perfectly. This one of the better quality x Reader stories I have had the pleasure of reading. Really hope you continue this. I mean, we all need an outlet for this freaky crush on Bill :D

Love it! Plz make more!

dang.
also this is really well written, i think you captured bill's character really well. this chapter was really eventful, and at some points i laughed. bill can be a bit of a weirdo, but bill's bill.
also i heard the riddle from the earlier chapter before and remembered the answer! not sure if i should spout the word in the reviews, maybe i'm wrong but i'll go ahead and say it. is it a kiss? :o

this is really well written! i can't wait for the next chapter. (my embarrassing crush on bill cipher is never going to end :'P)