Reviews for Black Blood the Rewrite |
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Tokitakun chapter 3 . 5/6 Is this merely on hiatus or has it been abandoned? |
EdTheBeast chapter 3 . 4/30/2019 Its cute & semi funny! |
Ryuuohjin chapter 2 . 9/20/2018 Dead? |
pepijn30 chapter 3 . 9/12/2018 its been seveal mondays since the last update am i alowed to ask by now. also personaly i say he still should have sheno and euriale |
Argonaut986 chapter 3 . 5/4/2018 Hermione fainted? That’s a first. |
Argonaut986 chapter 2 . 5/4/2018 If it’s the witch of betrayal, I can understand their concerns. |
Argonaut986 chapter 1 . 5/4/2018 Madam Brunestud is not to be messed with. |
god of all chapter 3 . 3/16/2018 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
hnh058513 chapter 3 . 9/13/2017 Please continue Medb is to cute |
Ryuuohjin chapter 1 . 9/1/2017 Dead? |
Ryuuohjin chapter 3 . 4/6/2017 Like it, hope for more |
Kithrin chapter 2 . 1/12/2017 once thing that i hope you correct in the rewrite is that illya seemed to br completely depended on her trump card, the archer class card |
shuujin.takagi chapter 3 . 8/16/2016 Interesante fic, espero que actualices pronto |
NHunter chapter 3 . 7/24/2016 Harry summons Medb... He's so royally screwed now! |
Paxloria chapter 3 . 7/16/2016 Its a good chapter. Will Kiritsugu be able to comunicate with illya now that she's at Hogwarts and away from the family Castle? Why'd her Grandfather let her go there anyway instead of making her stay to toughen her up and train for the next Grail War? The only real problem i see in this chapter is at the end. Medb and Medea may be famous names in historical & magical societies, but there's no reason that Hermione should faint after hearing them since lots of kids are named after peole from history and the last part of their names was left out. Also, they are suposed to be going to Hogwarts disgused as Students (until status as Familiars'Servants is known), so giving their identity away is a bad idea and not a smart move that any magus type sceemer would make. I guess this means that you'll need to change things so Caster & Rider will need to have fake last names (since they can't use their real ones). |