Sip April si estan discutiendo sobre sus vacaciones, además Leo tiene razón, no pueden ir y atacar a lo tonto, eso es estúpido, me sorprende que April actue asií

well done on your first story, it's a good start I liked it and from what I can see there is only one mistake I can see and it's not even that major. it's where mikey says "enjoyed" it can just be put as enjoy :). see no harm no foul, I would love to see some more of your ideas when you get the chance. I mean I may be good at English but I just can't write stories the way others can. And I think I also secretly ship leo and april too :).

That was Amazing
I may ship them more

Omg do more with LeoxApril XD