Michael-as an outsider,,what do you think of the human race?

This was hauntingly beautiful. I especially loved how you depicted the inner conflict within Neri.

Idea - what if Carlo's sons and Fredo's illegitimate son grew up and decided to avenge themselves on Michael?

Oh my God this was beautiful. Eloquently written, perfectly paced and an excellent portrayal of each character and the differences between them. You did what Al Pacino did in the movie, made me hate Michael for his cold indifference to killing his own brother, yet at the same time made me hope he'd learn from his mistakes! The story was short and simple, but so tragic and overflowing with emotion. I love it. 3