Reviews for Guardians of Forever |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A charming and well written story. I'm enjoying reading this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has a lot of elements to it that are confusing because they haven't been developed enough. A little more proof reading will be valuable as well. Other than that please continue writing. Fan fiction is great for developing skills, especially plot and characterisation. You do need more development as a writer, but your potential is huge. Keep going. B Arts (English) in Creative Writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Leon also Angelian? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally, Harry and Ginny are together now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry was so cute here |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the description of the necklace and I'm curious about Carbuncle |
![]() ![]() I LOVED IT! Ginny name is actually Ginevra... Other than that... AMAZING! I loved the end and the names and everything definitely AU but in the best possible way. I have no regrets of reading this Farewell |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting meeting but I really doubt that Malfoy would be anywhere near where Hermione lived in the muggle world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it just me or does the amethyst eyes guy sound like a Jedi? |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS ASOLUTE BLOODY SHIT! No offense ment, but that's my Opinion, sorry. |
![]() ![]() i love this u first posted this on my 5th bday funny right |
![]() ![]() ![]() a little speedy but other than that it was elegant in it's simplicity, and hopefully it's sequel may be the same way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() IS Leon Hart a guardian? |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() HI. That was great! |