Reviews for The Cloak
Un-accessible account chapter 13 . 1/9/2017
This is by far, the BEST Merlin fanfiction I've read on this site. I eagerly await the news of a sequel.
wryter501 chapter 13 . 8/7/2016
thank you for writing this story, i really enjoyed it!
i think the analogy of merlin as a vigilante is a very good one, and i really like that the people of camelot get to see 'good' magic at work - merlin having to hide what he did, the fact that a 'good' sorcerer saved them, was detrimental in the long run not only to arthur but the populace at large...
(i totally think you ought to have called lancelot 'dagger', it would have been perfect - cloak and dagger!)
i suppose you have a sequel in mind, where arthur finds out and we get more of nimueh and her cryptic remarks and goals... ?
Lya200 chapter 13 . 7/21/2016
*heart rate intensifies* Merlin is...Nimueh's son?!
mersan123 chapter 13 . 7/21/2016
Oooh, interesting ending. Do I feel a sequel coming on?
Enjoyed the story. Many thanks.
mersan123 chapter 11 . 7/19/2016
Yep, Merlin just gets in deeper and deeper. Will he let Agravaine reveal his identity? Not too sure about that. Just hope he and Lance have some sort of plan.
Not sorry to see Hengist leave the story *snicker*.
Thanks, enjoyed a very action packed chapter.
mersan123 chapter 10 . 7/17/2016
Finally Merlin/Cloak accepts some help. Just as well too it would seem. Nice to see Arthur save him and seems to be coming around with regards to magic.
mersan123 chapter 9 . 7/15/2016
Excellent. Enjoyed the chapter. Should be interesting having Arthur along with the Cloak and Knight Blade!
Lya200 chapter 8 . 7/13/2016
Now this is an interesting twist. Trying to make Merlin and Gwen a thing, then turning around and BOOM! A little Mergana. I love it.
mersan123 chapter 8 . 7/13/2016
Gosh, could Arthur be any more of a prat? Honestly, how does Merlin put up with it? Not only about magic but Agravaine as well.
Poor Merlin having to handle him day in day out.
Great to see they escaped - but a little intrigued as to how.
Thanks. Loved the up date.
mersan123 chapter 6 . 7/9/2016
Oh Merlin. Such a dangerous game being played. Agravaine is the best of the sleaze too. Not good for him to know of Merlins identity.
Loved the water fight and the first kiss. Enjoyed the teasing from Arthur and Morgana too.
Many thanks.
mersan123 chapter 5 . 7/8/2016
Gee Merlin is going to need to be more careful. Too many people have either recognised him as the Cloak or are starting to get suspicious.
Agravaine needs to be shown as the traitor he is.
Thanks. Enjoyed the chapter.
mersan123 chapter 4 . 7/5/2016
Excellent. I must say I am enjoying Merlin as the Cloak. Lancelot as his help is a nice touch. I wonder if Arthur will manage to dig up the truth about Merlins father - or will Agravaine do something with the knowledge.
Loved the chapter. Many thanks.
mersan123 chapter 3 . 7/3/2016
The Cloak. He comes across a little like a medieval Batman (with magic).
Good fun. Thanks.
mersan123 chapter 2 . 7/1/2016
Enjoyed the chapter. Merlin is sweet and already a defender in Camelot. Arthur is still a prat. There you go.
Fai's smile chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
Well, this sounds interesting.
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