Why is it that the only people who seem to get ruby and yangs characterization right are the crossover wtiters? In crossovers they are written like sisters instead of the straight rwby fanfics where they get written like a mother and daughter. And although she is 18 here crossovers tend to write her like an actual teenager and not a 10 year old in a 15 year old body.

Rosa was always an interesting character since shes basically a walking spoiler.

Ayeo guess who's back sorry I haven't commented lately life was just catching up to hit me like a Mac truck, but I'm back and now caught back up on your amazing work. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out and especially can't wait to see what you have in store for Reese
Much love to the story and your ability to write itOOMogar

I really like this story. Not just because its a good read but helps me out during my current first playthrough of things i missed. Though i play the malkavian. They just have so many more entertaining dialogue choices.

While it doesent tell what clan ruby is here it does tell you what shes not. No voices and junk so it automatically rules out makavian or however its spelled.

This is a crossover I did not expect, and did not really expect it to be any good.
You proved me wrong though. This was a really good read.
Cant wait for the next update!

Fat Larry, Smiling Jack, and Beckett were my favorite characters in this game.
First thing I though back in '04 when I first played through was simple with Fat Larry: "This. Guy. Is. AWESOME!"

And the vampires team was never heard from again.

This feels like a episode of supernatural awesome.

I never played vampire I can’t get it to work so this is as much a learning experience for me as it is for Ruby.

The part where Blake and Weiss hug was so cute it nearly made my heart explode.

I know you said that you weren't planning to ship any of them in this story, but screw it. This is the best Pollination story I have ever read and I will fucking fight anybody who tries to say differently.

I wonder how this is going to tie in with Vampire: The Masquerade – Bloodlines 2. Personally I hope that you'll make a sequel to this one where after killing LaCroix and saving Los Angeles, Ruby, Weiss, Blake, and Yang move to Seattle to avoid any repercussions that may result from killing a Camarilla Prince.

I keep getting a notification that this updated but when I download it there isn't one. weird.

This looks interesting and decently written but I do hope you aren't just going to lift everything from the games. The second chapter feels a bit artificial as all of these "plot of game but with other character" fics seem to feel. It might just be because I know it's on rails already but it really feels like a novelization of a bad RPG from the 2000's. (Not saying it's a bad game, but a pillar of literary excellence old RPG's are not).

That said it can be hard to make your own story set in a universe as complex as this one, but again I'm really hoping this isn't a one for one copy of actions with Ruby like thoughts pulled in.

(These concerns may be entirely unfounded but this is something that I've seen most of the "good" video game insert fics do)

So Confession is going to be like the Continental Hotel in John Wick and John Wick 2. A place where all Kindred and Kuei-Jin can go without risk of violence from others. Maybe even other creatures. Cool.

By the way, are you going to have Kalliyan in this? I hope so, because I've always liked the idea of a Kindred and a Kuei-Jin coexisting peacefully.

I admit that i am a bit disappointed, but that's about me.
I mean, i'm disappointed because i hoped that Ruby would stay human. I tought she was going to be the " Samatha " of VtmB (you know, the human friend of the main character of the game).

I tought Yang would be the Vampire. And i ought that Ruby would be the human sister that get entangled in the World of Darkness while searching for her sister.

Instead, i guess this is VtmB with Ruby as the protagonist. Well, i will nonetheless give it a try because your style is very nice.