This was honestly a Great Story, I wish that there was more details in between the 1st and 2nd Chapter. Rating 8.3/10 :)

Hakoda-Dad and Toph-sister feels to Zuko are always my favorite!

Kinda annoyed that a Sokka or Aang never believed Katara is capable in killing Zuko that they allowed Zuko be to attacked. Sure Sokka would know the difference between a duel and not a duel? Aang of course he doesn’t. Zuko we knew would not have not think Katara would killed him right then and there. It’s his luck.

Awesome mini fic!

Ok this might sound awful but... Katara kinda strikes me as a self-righteous bitch

He he. Love it.

Ahhh, so good! I loved it! Thank you so much for writing it!

I love stories with Hakoda and Zuko. Why aren't there more of them on this site?!
But in all seriousness, this was excellently done. You did a great job with the characters' voices.
Now, could we sometime see that talk between Hakoda and his children about all that's happened - especially with Katara trying to murder Zuko? ;-)
Keep writing!

Byahtiful.

Very nice. I enjoyed the way you kept the characters very in character, and the overall story as well. Good job. As for a prompt, perhaps something with Hakoda (I can't spell his name, sorry) and Zuko after the rescue from the prison? Maybe some mistrust, some misunderstandings, Zuko's understandable wariness/fear of Hakoda given his experience with his own father would be nice too.

Oh yeah, with Zuko's luck this would TOTALLY happen.
Also, I'm totally waiting to see if other reviewers leave a bunch of "Katara's a bitch" comments. :P It just seems like something that might happen.
But anyway - this was superbly written. The action scene was great, Zuko felt really in-character, and I loved seeing Sokka be mature and responsible near the end. Just excellent.
Keep writing!

This is quite interesting. I like it. The action sequence was very well-done. The dialogue was realistic. This is good.