So sad about Fred and you've written it really well but also feel a lot of sweetness from Ron and Hermione.I love it.

It's hard to read about Fred's death, but I'm glad Ron is starting to open up to Hermione about his conflicting feelings - and that they both acknowledged, however obliquely, that they want to be together.

Oh, this could be a beginning to a great story. Love the way they work together. Thanks.

Sad, but sweet. Great Job! I really like it!

Yes, lovely story!

Wow. This was so emotional and beautiful! I loved it! Especially the part where Hermione says losing someone is hard for anyone and that it's all hard. It's so true. I'm glad that she doesn't force him to choose.

awwww! that was sad!

Nice story.

Very cool. Wish you'd added more detail in terms of what they're doing, their surroundings, so on, but it was good. I liked it! :)

That was a great chapter.