can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Hoorayyyy now updatetetetet

More please I can't wait to see what happens next

The story is going very well I hope you keep up the great work
The Dragon1010

i like where this is going, hiccazi for life.

Great two chapters. I'm with Gobber, he lives with idiots. I think I have read the same story cause I recognized that scene. Don't remember the name of it either, but it was still nice to see it was similar and different. I think those moments a silly, like why would you toss a perfectly good weapon that has never let you down, just because you dislike it's creator? I mean heck, look at how many Americans own weapons made by the USSR and Communist China. They are still good weapons no matter who made them. And silly rant is silly and over.

This chapter. I do agree, the Bogs are interesting and I think this is something Bertha would do. I can't wait to see the Bogs be first to ride Dragons instead of Berk, those idiots.

With everything going on, I am going against my preference and voting for HiccupXCami. I can see it happening better the Hicstrid and it makes way more sense. Cause why would anybody one berk, except Gobber and Gothi, want anything to do with him? I mean ya, Astrids had doubts about the whole weapon thing but fell to peer pressure, but she hated Hiccup like the rest of them. And I don't think she would get over it so easy.
Until next time,
Keep up the awesomely amazing work!

THAT WAS A HUGE MISTAKE ! One that will come back and bite berk in the ass , guess nobody taught the vikings that pride goes before a fall , can't wait for the next chapter .

I know the fanfic has already continued past this point but I'd have voted for toothcup

I also agree with other people with the fact that those stories where people who were betrayed decide it's a good idea to still like the person who betrayed them, that kind of thing happens way to often, which is why I agree that hiccstrid shouldn't happen here

Nice

Wait, what happened between the end of last chapter and this one?
Until next time,
Keep up the amazing work!

hiccup x cami, good to see an update

Hiccup X Cami. That's my vote. Good start to the break out. Infant wait to see it happen cause I bet it will involve hiccup actually having to kill somebody and I can't wait to see how it affects him.
Until next time,
Keep up the fantastic work!

great chapter, something tells me disaster is coming to berk thanks to snotlout and it will ruin everyone , including astrid, my vote is for hiccup / camicazi , keep up the good work .

I vote Hiccup X Camicazi

I love Hiccstrid too, but it's not gonna happen here. But I wouldn't object to Astrid trying to get in Hiccup's pants when he returns.