Well this story was wild from start to finish, but I loved every minute of it. Thank you for writing it, you did an amazing job.

Your story is brilliant I very much enjoyed reading it. This is like... the only fandom I can read mpreg and have it make sense which always makes me happy. I love seeing the relationship grow between the two. I will say I feel really bad for Jack. The Doctor could have made a few visits before the end of that hundred years. Sure, it's best for him in the kids, but no way was it best for Jack. Still, everything worked out.

I'm not a huge fan of the fact ultimately Jack couldn't love both of them fully. I feel like it sort of teaches a weird lesson. Poly is actually doable to the point where he wouldn't have needed to split off from one of them. It's not like he had 50 lovers, just 2. Taking into consideration the fact he was from a time where those relationships were common, it's a bit weird that it fell apart. Still, it added to the story and I love how it worked out so there isn't anything for it.

Anyway, thanks for the awesome story! You keep doing you, and have a great christian holiday.

Yes! Great ending!

Good ending ..for all

I'm so excited omg!

Good ending to this story..Glad Jack had a life with Ianto..Now it's,the Doctors turn. Well story now?

The Doctor knows what's best..Megan is on the way too getting better..more..

Poor Doctor..least It helped Megan's energy..Felt for Martha too..Jack in the middle?
Please update?

Good chapter..So now will Megan..win the fight ..Update soon..

Poor Doctor..Jack will be here this time,but will the baby be okay?
Update soon..

Good chapter..the Doctor taking comfort from Jack,but come on will they both admit it ..Update Please..

Oh...Doctor,why don't you tell him..tell Jack. He has an idea,but won't voice it,himself..
Glad the girls are happy..please update..

Maybe he should have..? Good chapter...Pride got in the way,especially when a t happened earlier between him and Jack..update?

Things are getting better between them..Jack and the Doctor..How will that go..a date with Ianto..the three of them? Update soon.

Oh dear..This is getting harder and harder on both sides..Jack wants both,but The Doctor and Ianto,want him,but not together...What next? Please update..