Reviews for Overwatch: Rise of the Successor
Night chapter 4 . 2/26/2019
It's been 2 years please continue when you can
Guest chapter 4 . 6/1/2018
I really really like this and it’s pretty original and I read fanfiction a LOT so I should know but I hope you ge inspired again soon good luck with your life and writing and also you do pretty good on the writing I’m no good at it and it sounds like a five year old wrote it if a five year old had a really big vocabulary but yeah keep it up this is good and I couldn’t wait to see what happened next and the only thing I would fix is to be a little less repetitive.
Pstachio chapter 4 . 4/23/2018
This story has to be one of my very top favorites! I love how the story revolves around Jackson and how he grows more confident in the short duration of his days of becoming a superhero! This is fun, funny, and still holds some action. I can't wait for the next update!

Oh! And I think Jackson's superhero name should be 'Knockout'. Rather fitting, no? Lol
Marshman101 chapter 4 . 4/7/2018
Wow this is amazing and I hope you have time to update this it is a mei zing
Dethcat chapter 4 . 1/22/2018
I really do hope you haven’t forgotten about this work of art, be a damn shame to see it go nowhere. Hope your life’s finally back on track enough to at least put out one more chapter but if not? Well damn I guess
Dethcat chapter 3 . 1/22/2018
The Successor & Soldier: 76 squaded up to take out the trash, I am internally fangirling so hard right now!
Dethcat chapter 2 . 1/22/2018
Awwwwww hell yeah! Seen my motherfucking Soldier: 76!
M chapter 4 . 1/8/2018
I understand, everyone has their own life to live. I must say though, I love this story! Please keep it up!
Bob chapter 1 . 10/29/2017
Hello , i just want to say that your fanfiction very good but the blue hoodie guy is called brian and his brother chris , it was said in the bts of the trailer
GhostFang GF chapter 4 . 8/18/2017
I hope you are going to continue this story. Also, this is just a thought, but maybe you can give Jackson an armor that looks like the Crossbones armor from the Captain America: Civil War movie? I don't know, I just feel like this is an armor that Jackson needs to have. Plus, it can get him out of that ridiculous outfit he has now. And if you do then remember, the chest plate, gauntlets, shin guards and helmet are bulletproof.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
Mate right more
Guest chapter 4 . 7/7/2017
Aye mate, you'should really continue this story
Guest chapter 4 . 7/4/2017
I could see a partnership between 76 and Jackson being like a batman and Robin type. Him teaching him fighting and battle strategy. Maybe taking em to the shooting range, or just practice shooting. Then when they both join up with overwatch and Jackson is more of a full fledged hero he can meet tracer again, he can introduce himself with his code name and be all like. "Ya, the world could always use more heros"
Guest chapter 4 . 7/4/2017
Hey dude, could u finish 4 please?
Arkham Wyntier chapter 4 . 6/22/2017
Trust me man, I know how school can keep you busy, no rush whatsoever.

I do legitimately wanna see what happens next though. I can't help but wonder if Jackson's mother is really so oblivious to what her boss was doing...
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