Lol, you got Mushu's voice down perfectly! Poor Cri-Kee, trying to stop his foolish friend XD Cute and funny fic!

Hahaha! Good story

Well done! Funny, and nicely told. Never expected to see a new Mulan fic after all these years.

Oh my goodness I loved this fanfiction. I've always been curious about what caused Mushu to light the cannon and this is a perfect explanation. Especially loved the dialogue - I could practically hear Mushu saying all of his lines, they were all hilarious and you wrote his character perfectly! This is such a creative idea and so funny/well-written. Loved it!

Very good explanation, and perfectly in character! I could hear Mushu's voice clearly.

Is this fic done or will you continue?

poor Mushu. poor cri-kee. poor Mulan. poor frozen everyone