Hello
Your story is wonderfull !
But It's abandonned ?

This is really interesting. Please write more soon.

This is a really good story. Some parts are so warm then so sad that it makes you want to cry.

My heart is breaking! Poor Obi-Wan has been put through enough, even if he made some dumb decisions, I cant stand it! So I'm begging you to heal them soon... I can't take much more Obi angst!

That said, this is brilliant! Please update soon!

Very very GOOD

Wooow, this chapter is so beautiful! I LOVE how you characterize Padme. She's so humorously independent and having none of Anakin's (necessary and realistic) self-doubt. I feel like Anakin was right in that she was being naive about Obi-Wan... because the Jedi are so isolationist, she wouldn't necessarily know all about their philosophies that Anakin knows about. But she's doing her best to be there for him, and he seems to appreciate it.

I liked the argument comparing Anakin's relationship with Obi-Wan to his bond with Ahsoka. They ARE very different - and Obi-Wan's flashback shows that all the more.

OMG. I also just have to say this: I am so disappointed in Garen. Shame! Shaaaame! "Who's going to bother teaching a slave how to read and write?" Excuse me. Where is your Jedi compassion? Sure, accept that he was a slave so flippantly, but also not show any care about that? Just go straight past the horrors/abuse to concern over formal education? Just, no, excuse me. How dare you?! Is this the compassion you Jedi show for victims?

Wow, okay, that was more emotional than what I originally intended to write, but it is my reaction. Eheh, sorry.

Great chapter! I really, really enjoyed it! Yessss to the Luke and Leia coming into the party! Whoo! (I loved how Anakin was slower on the uptake than Padme; oh the perks of motherhood, even better than the cosmic power of the universe.)

Again, wonderful job! Keep writing!

Awwww! :3 more, please, MORE! .

Aw yay, the twins were born! That was such a nice little scene, and I like how you pointed out the importance behind their names.
The flashback with Obi-Wan and Anakin was so well done and it seemed like something lifted straight out of the movies. It makes sense that Anakin would have trouble fitting in, and it makes sense that Obi-Wan would struggle with the burden of being Anakin's master with so little experience. It adds a new dimension to their characters - part of Anakin's reason for loving so much is because he's desperate for a place of his own in someone's life and desperate for the compassion that wasn't afforded him at the temple; and Obi-Wan feels like he let Anakin down now and also earlier in his life and that fuels his remorse. I love it!
I'm sad that Menace is gone but I'll be looking forward to it when it comes back. I enjoyed reading it through the first time so I'm sure I'll enjoy it a second time too!

great story so far!

Dear God this chapter was glorious. I loved how each parent named said kid after the live they felt for their spouse. That was really touching. As for the whole daddy's girl and momma's boy thing, I feel like each kid should have a special bond with each parent. Like how Luke and Anakin will really be into mechanics together and Leia and Padme will be into politics. But maybe Leia will really like watching podracing with her dad and Luke will like drinking tea with his mom. Something like that. Although I'd love for there to be an activity that they all love doing together. Maybe going swimming? Really looking forward to the next chapter, keep it up!

I can't wait.

Wonderful.

Absolutely beautiful amd full of emotion! I love your take. And the monologue each parent had to their twins was absolutely well done.
I love the way you portray A/P struggling over what Ani has almost done and their efforts to make it better. Their relationship us also portrayed very lovingly, I live that!

Great chapter!

we are back! and I dont know if I just havent read enough fics but you are like, the first writer I see point the meaning of Leia's name in regards to Anakin and Padme's date, it just cant be a coincidence