Wow great chapter!

Senpai, why you gotta love me at the wrong time? (Also.. OSANA YOU BITCH!)

Yeah I can't sympathize with murderers. Megami and I have identical opinions regarding those kinds of "people". Nice try though.

*reads ending*
Only Hanako

STOP RUINING THE MOMENT! XD

Sadly, yes Ayano, we all have to lie at some point in our lives...

Hi, I think that the idea of this story is great. However, the story is quite jumpy, and the grammar and vocabulary errors are hard to be ignored.
It's 'revise' not 'revive.' Revive means to resurrect, make something alive again.
It's 'chest' not 'chess'. Chess is a board game.

Y'know this story is... annoyingly good! The reason I describe it like that is because how emotionally frustrated I was in it by the end.
So you start of with the classic Yandere-Senpai dynamic and then the idea that she gave up, was *really* good - Seeing her suddenly asking herself "what's the point?" was a really interesting route to go down. Then on comes Kaitan. And at first I thought I'd hate him, but then the friendship he build up with Ayano was beautiful, especially seeing how he was able to make her happy and helped her begin to get over Taro...
And then Taro comes back... At this point you had completely sold me on Kaitan and Ayano becoming a thing, so Taro coming in and creating this new love-triangle was what made it emotionally frustrating; since they all were good characters at this point. I have to applaud you on that because it's what makes good drama! Keeping this spoiler-free I was incredibly disappointed in the outcome... But while I was unhappy with the result, it did ultimately make it much more enticing, so well done!

I like the concept but tbh, the grammar is making it kind of difficult for me to want to continue. Sorry if this comes across as harsh.

The grammar and spellings are a little bad- just a little. This sounds... okay so far. I'll see how this goes.

I love this story

I like though the ship of yan-chan and her off is my main ship and I find it weird how Senpai just out of the blue likes yan-chan

Osana-chan is a real bitch. how could she just walk up to Senpai and say they're through?!

This is so good

*thunderous applause*