Awesome chapter. Lucy may be a scatterbrain but she's kind.

I love this story very much. How Natsu is the Brain and Luvy the Brawn.

I think you’ve dome a great job on this chapter as well as the story. It is interesting to see what you’ve done with this role reversal. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more.

next chapter soon i hope

i really love this book ! Hope u update soon !

please update soon i love this story

I was reading this story again, and you won't believe the joy I get in reading this. I can't wait for you to update soon. Like, I check my emails every day to make sure I don't miss an update. So, please update soon.

I really love your stories, I hope you continue writing. You are amazing!

i love this stor so far its farly unice

I'm just super excited there was another update from you. I literally pushed my sister out of my room to read this update. I can't wait for the next one. I also loved it.

Lucy and Erza's relationship is adorable.

Something I need to point out that I've seen throughout the story. You have multiple people talking in the same paragraph. It is proper to make new paragraphs when someone different talks. Jumbling multiple people's dialogue into one paragraph can be confusing and make it difficult to figure out who is saying what. It is also best not to have dialogue in the middle of a narrative. Again it is best to make a new paragraph.

I'm so happy you're doing better! I just caught up and read the last chapter and was really worried! I love how alternate this story but still give it that much loved fairy tail vibe! I also hope you're Lil boy enjoys school because I miss kindergarten!

“I hope Erzie will let me keep you.”
I actually let out a snort and laughed at that.

hiya Tkitty, I have been reading your stories and love them, hope you are okay, and hope college is good! love this story, hope you can continue it! bysies!

I believe this can become a very good story if you continue