can't wait for the next chapter in this story

I like the character conversations at the end! They're funny! Haha!

Wait. MAGIC? F*CKING MAGIC!

A:What does it mean dragon-soul? B:what the f*ck does he look like if he's not a total twig? Also this story is great I consider myself to have a dragon-soul, though I can't speak their tongue.

TO BE CONTINUED!TO BE CONTINUED!TO BE CONTINUED!TO BE CONTINUED!TO BE CONTINUED!TO BE CONTINUED!TO BE CONTINUED!TO BE CONTINUED!TO BE CONTINUED!TO BE CONTINUED!

CH 9 ADD GUSTAV SOON PLEASE . EVEN YOUNGER IT DOES NOT MATTER. Get the archer . I want Astrid to be the last . Or depends .

The dragons are so hilarious.
Try to start small with small terrors . SNEAKY IS PERFECT .

Fetch things should be Iggy .
Hit heads is Head and Bang or something like that .

And Pain Bite is PAIN

Bye now .

Honestly I didn't think Snotlout would be the best option but, now it kinda makes sense. Also will you be adding Thuggery? After all you did say that him and Hiccup were friends way early on. Great job so far.
The Dragon1010

Actually, Black Cat, Astrid is technically an expy of Camicazi, that's why they didn't have her in the movie

Torturing, abusing or paralyzing ANYONE is NEVER FUNNY.

No. Concerning Astrid and Cami-you're wrong on both counts.

Awesome update

YAY! You updated. I'm am now happy. Thank you. :)

YAAAAY! Thank you for coming back! This was a brilliant chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

I can only imagine how Astrid will react to the fact that 2 people in the village have dragon souls.
#JEALOUS

good chap