I really like the plot. There are a lot of emotions in this. I could feel their pain when they had to be aparted from each other. Please keep updating. And thanks for writing this story.

Good story

next please!

MORE! I just read all of this in a couple of hours and I want more :)

I'm so glad I found your story. I absolutely love it and can't wait for more!

pleaseee update

Well, let's see, THIS WAS FREAKING AMAZING! So, yeah...

Update pleaseeee! :'( please please please update!

i love it! please update soon!

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no words at all
no words at all for it
no words at all for it . . .

what is your blueberry story?

mesmerised not mercerised
¿Puedo ir a tu casa a jugar con Max? is what I translate it into not what you had . . .
I am laughing so hard cause of Magnus's doubts & whatnot . . .
keep up the fantabulous work :P :D :P :D :P :D :P :D :P :D :P :D :P :D :P :D :P :D :P :D :P :D :P :D
P.S. if you got any reviews by Little Miss Kitty Kat 101, it would be by me . . . accidently was on that account

I don't know whether to laugh or cry
my laughs are stopping me from crying but my eyes are watery
people rarely can do that to me . . .
including professional writers
last time I did that I was probably 7
5 & 1/2 years ago . . . 1 month . . .

keep it up (laugh crying)

that chapter made my eyes water cause it was soo cute . . . it should have some flashbacks from max & rafes point of view (rafe - biological family & homeless (meeting magnus & becoming it) max - growing up)
other than that . . . BRAVADO!

no Lydia don't ruin everything! but awws malec was cute. glad max is okay

go rafe! he's useful in a crisis. and awws poor magnus didn't know! I'm glad Alec wasn't mad.