Reviews for The Dying Will Flame of the Know-It-All Princess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() so first gonna say l9ve the story and the plot but just one question why is Hermione so hard on Harry if she understands his situation and kinda can see where he's coming from I don't see why she would be so hard on him. but maybe that's just me and my forgiving nature. anyway keep up the good work! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nbzbsnnsndjx EXCUSE ME?! HOLD THE PHONE BUT NANI?! IM SHOOOKED! AND CLIFFHANGER WHY TWT |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. I find it kinda stupid her parents are CEDEF. I think it would be better if Hermione was related on Nana's side, but her having Flames is wicked cool too. Most ironic thing is that she as Giotto's descendent has HI, and Divination said she was hopeless when HI is a form of foresight. Quite ironic in my opinion. Anyways, i just find it silly overall that if her background is to have Mafia then wouldn't she have been more active in her roles? Or say have Vongola invade britain after the chamber of secrets as one of their own was petrified or when Voldemort was resurrected. Personally I think it would have been nice if she was ignorant of the mafia (cause she's related via nana not bakamitsu) and then have chaos arrive unexpectedly. Anyways, I think both worlds can balance each other out very well. While wizards are fucking powerful and versitile, they lack so much common sense (I wish hermione calls malfoy a 'filthy inbred' or if she wonders if the family would have brothers fucking sisters, said crudely to emphasis her distain). The mafia also lacks common sense, but they are way more serious and better educated overall. Plus they use EVERY rss available in combat unlike wizards who rely so much on certain aspects like their wands that they are fundamentally useless without them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No. Just no. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story is great but a little difficult for me to read...some of it is the Grammer others just kinda confused me..but it's a good story... |
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![]() ![]() Not bad, this is a pretty good chapter. Look forward to next one. Off Topic: About your avatar, she’s mine too mate... Emma is just breathtaking and amazing, and not just her appearance. Personally I don’t get why people hate her as Belle, I think she owned it. (will be buying the DVD this week) And the singing wasn’t that bad, I think she did the best with what they had. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol Harry dealing with issues. Cutest babies around. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oof not good, you better think twice Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meh a paper fan is not as bad as the twins’ usual pranks on Ron n the rest of the castle |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have missed you and this story, I hope that everything is alright with you and your family and I also hope that you had a great Hliday, anyway really loved this new chapter, thanks ever so much, I want to ask if you had any plans in updating your other Hermione stories? anyway thanks ever so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() surely Neville is more accepting to herm's guest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for the next chapter. I love this story |