Reviews for New Hero |
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A Petty Theif chapter 1 . 4/9 If anyone of these three die, I cry |
eagle219406 chapter 30 . 3/10/2019 Finally made it to the last chapter. I hope you update soon. |
eagle219406 chapter 25 . 3/5/2019 Just made it to this chapter. It's good, but one thing confuses me. Up until now, you made it seem as though Overwatch was unaware that Reaper was really Reyes, that they believed Reyes had died in the explosion. Here you have Genji call him "Gabriel" and yet, nobody seemed shocked. Is there a reason for that? |
eagle219406 chapter 18 . 2/21/2019 I read the story up until here, and it's excellent. Sounds like how the game could be, if it had a story mode. I hope you continue the story one day. Just one question, what's your issue with "Never gonna give you up"? I love that song. |
eagle219406 chapter 7 . 2/3/2019 I have read your story up to this point. It is pretty good. I hope you finish. I am curious about one thing. Why you suddenly changed the style. What I mean is, up until this point, the story was completely third person. This chapter you switched between first and third like you couldn't make up your mind, and in later chapters, which I skimmed through, you completely changed it to first person. Is there a reason for that, and if so, what is it? |
dbznutter1990 chapter 29 . 11/13/2018 Love this fic please keep it going and not let it die like so many fics |
BrutusPrimus chapter 29 . 11/6/2018 Nice chapter! Glad to see you back. |
phantom99 chapter 28 . 9/24/2018 This is really good can't wait to see what happens next |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 Great so far |
Aures chapter 2 . 2/18/2018 Im loving this! |
Bossatron chapter 28 . 1/23/2018 This is probably the best chapter so far. It's so good, when are you coming out with another one? Keep up the good work, hope you post soon. |
TheKingOfTheMotorMouth's chapter 28 . 10/5/2017 another great chapter can't wait for the next chapter |
Arrow1021 chapter 28 . 10/4/2017 awsome chapter, keep up the good work |
Dragon chapter 28 . 10/4/2017 I hate to be the asshole who points this out but there was some lore problems in this chapter. Reaper only joined Talon AFTER the fall of Overwatch and had nothing to do with Widowmaker's brainwashing which occurred months if not a couple of years before. Widowmaker also was let loose to kill her husband before her skin was turned blue. |
Rage against the dying of the chapter 28 . 10/4/2017 Can't wait until the other characters are introduced! I love the way you write this story, I honestly love it. |