Reviews for The Bride trials
King Vader 66 chapter 4 . 5/30/2019
Umm I think a Yautja would consider Alice as an abomination and killed her
LadyDeath01 chapter 24 . 3/24/2019
Definitely liked this chapter, I am glad that Eve and Kantanu are official. I am sure she will like the training program that they get to attend. I hope all the girls will get to do it.

Well great chapter, and update soon :D
LadyDeath01 chapter 23 . 3/24/2019
I am really liking the connection between Eve and Kantanu, in many ways they are the same. I really think this talk will help them understand each other better and hopefully Kantanu will no longer violate her mind like he has been.
Mariah chapter 24 . 3/10/2019
wow eve mated with Kantanu now they are together.

will Bonnie find out and be like he hypnotized you and i'll slap that out of her?
Mariah chapter 23 . 3/10/2019
wow Eve fought back with words.
Mariah chapter 22 . 3/10/2019
yikes poor eve she needs help.
Mariah chapter 21 . 3/10/2019
poor girls this is sad.
StormRaven333 chapter 24 . 3/12/2019
Omg! I was just wondering when this fic was going to be updated and then... boom! I dived right in on that and wow! :D
Mariah chapter 22 . 3/9/2019
Poor Eve she is going through so much pain.

what will happen next?
MonsterSlayer259 chapter 24 . 3/11/2019
Well that was steamy. Love to finally see the story being updated. Can we expect another update soon?
Oh Bee One chapter 24 . 3/10/2019
That was the fastest update I’ve ever seen! Ooooh, two chapters! This was so nice! I had a feeling Katanu would wake up while she was searching for answers lol. And I’m glad he did ;)

I laughed when Jaavik ran to their room expecting to fight a battle only to realize the situation lol. That was so good! XD

Yay! Eve and Katanu are mates now! I love this. I can’t wait to read more in the next chapter! :)
hellion117 chapter 22 . 3/10/2019
Inpregnate not Inpregnant lol and other than that lovin’ the way this is goin lol can’t wait to see the carnage the brides cause
Oh Bee One chapter 22 . 3/9/2019
Yay! An update! I’ve been waiting for this. There were so many moving parts in this, so many new things learned.

First off, I just wanted to say that my heart broke. It sounds like Kantra is dead and that might be cuz she’s human so she doesn’t live as long, unless there is an even more intricate plot that will be revealed soon.

Second, awwwww. It’s nice to know that Kantanu truly does care about Eve and I’m so glad Eve was able to see this with her own eyes in a sense. Hopefully things turn out for the better with the two of them.

There are so many questions to be answered, I can’t wait to learn them all. Thanks for the update! I look forward to chapter 23 ;)
monay9e chapter 21 . 1/18/2019
I loved it! Please finish this story.
MonsterSlayer259 chapter 21 . 9/18/2018
Wish we could get another chapter but love it like always
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