It’s very well written, and something I miss seeing in this fandom really. The way you’ve presented Jasper and Wren is quite pleasing to see- and I hope to see more of this splendid story you have

A short but sweet chapter. I loved it. Great work!

Oh my god I hope you keep going with this. I just your version of jasper so much, and wren is all too relatable tbh. Keep up the good work! 3

Can't wait for more!

Aww. Jasper and Wren are so broken, it's kinda hilarious. LMAO

Excellent chapter! I can’t wait to see how Wren and Jasper’s relationship develops as the plot goes along. I really relate to Wren’s social anxiety. The number of what ifs that zip through my mind when doing something as simple as meeting up with some friends is truly ridiculous and frustrating at the same time. Keep up the great work and I can’t wait for the next update.

I love both povs, Jasper is so sneaky lol also, I don't know how Wren is gonna cope with all the drama especialy when Bella arrives. Happy quarantine

Wonderful job! I really love your Jasper, keep up the good work!

yyYESSSSS I'M HAPPY TO SEE THIS UPDATED

i really like Wren. one, she sounds like a well-rounded character. two, I'm always happy for some diversity, it's just more realistic to how the world looks.

Jasper's point of view was a really nice touch, and in another 200 years if I get to see it again I won't say no lmaoo

I enjoy seeing Wren suffer through these awkward exchanges with Jasper so I guess I can't complain about him being a smug little sh*t and trying to make her react to him but God, poor girl

wow, she really lives on the edge of an anxiety attack wtf also can you imagine Edward just reading booth their thoughts and him just blankly staring at these two while they go through their sh*t in their minds every time they meet each other or think about each other...I'm really starting to pity Edward

ah, Jasper, what a smooth little btch

it's so much fun to see her flounder around him

this poor girl, getting hot in the middle of the cantine...sometimes I really feel grateful I don't have a d*ck, and I think Wren has just gone through one of those moments

I am addicted. This is amazing.

Please don't give up on it!