Reviews for The Great Red Betrayal |
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darth56 chapter 9 . 2/23/2017 i love this story you are a great writer and have a great mind to think of this twist but please keep it up i can not get enough of it write a lot more chapters as i can thin of many ways you can take this story and again thank you for your time spend in writing this you have written the best story's i have read on this site thank you so much i am always waiting for more from you great job! |
Zesturia chapter 9 . 2/23/2017 Hmmm I cried a bit...hope Ray Issei and Penume have a happy ending...: But knowing you anything is possible Can't wait for next chap! |
maddjharry chapter 9 . 2/23/2017 If possible could you make more like this cause it reminds me of game of thrones so if you can thank you and keep up the good work |
T-B-R chapter 9 . 2/23/2017 Woah! nice twist with Raynare. |
DeadMenPlaying chapter 9 . 2/23/2017 Nice it was worth the wait |
FateBurn chapter 9 . 2/23/2017 Good chapter, cant wait to see your different endings, |
yano the pervert chapter 9 . 2/23/2017 great chapter |
Darksnider05 chapter 2 . 2/18/2017 Good grief what a sexist view, she betrayed him and that makes her a shitty person but that's something she can do as a free person. |
Darksnider05 chapter 1 . 2/18/2017 Uh my real question is why would Issei abandon the rest of his friends instead of just cutting ties with Rias emotional wise. Like she doesn't owe him anything physically that's not how romantic relationships work. Sure what she did was scummy but that's the end of it. Move on and never forget that betrayal and maybe one day forgive but don't forget. |
FatMIRVman chapter 8 . 2/14/2017 Uh your gonna update and finish this right...PLEASE?! |
maddjharry chapter 3 . 2/5/2017 this is the only thing i could find what i could ever say for the story watch?v0VP7xTQf_qI |
Butterman274 chapter 8 . 2/3/2017 I need it |
arckane chapter 3 . 2/3/2017 Haha draig said the same shit they weren't even dating so why is he so hung on it haha draig is a real man issei is acting like a fmeal man this isn't how real fucking men act but alot of boys act like this nowadays cause we live in a sensitive ass society where everyone gets butt hurt over the smallest shit issei needs to grow a pair I mean he wanted to be harem king and fuck multiple women but when he catches rias fucking one guy he's all holier than thou you disgust me rias and gets all in his feeling cmon man stop being a hypocrite |
arckane chapter 2 . 2/3/2017 I think you blew isseis emotions way out of the water seriously why is he still so hung up on her I get if he's pissed and shit but just by seeing her he almost goes into a killing frenzy and loses his shit sounds hell childish to me plus they weren't even together but not only that issei already has another girl so he shouldn't be this hung up on rias I mean jesus Christ this issei is crazy over dramatic iit's partially his fault as well he never told her how he feels and some other dude came by and got deep inside her he finds out and wants to cry like a baby cmon man man the fuck up issei quit being a fucking baby |
mitelea chapter 1 . 2/2/2017 This makes no sense... He's angry because rias, who's not in a romantic relationship with him, somehow... "cheated" on him. She's not in a relationship so she can fuck whoever she wants and issei shouldn't be mad because he took so long |