That story deserves a big Wow! And finish with a bigger Awwww! Love the brothers fluff. Kick ass story. Sometimes better when they don't go on for 20 chapters. Depends what your in the mood for. More like this please.

Wow! How have I missed your stories? My word, this was a fantastic story! I enjoy reading a good H/C story and this one like so many I've read lately are mind-blowingly amazing. So glad to have found your stories! Thanks for sharing!

Oh wow. Powerful. Very well done.

Good story!

Wow, hopefully their next camp would be without someone shooting at them. Africa does have a big or rather huge problem with those guys hunting where they shouldn't.

Phew glad they got Gordon home in one piece. Do you have any more to this story? Some emotional fall out perhaps?

! CUUUUUUUTE!
(But John, please control your bloodlust ;w;)

Another great chapter. Loved the suspense but especially the humour that was evident.

YAY! YAY! YAY! :) YAY GORDON IS OKAY AND EVERYBODY IS ALIVE AND YAY! ;) I really love this story! :)

*hugs * oh I love a happy ending! Thank you

Update soon xx

WHERE'S GORDON!
UWAAAAAA! SAVE EVERYONEEEEE! ;~;

Omg yay I love Gordon whump! I am already in love with this story. Please update soon!

Where is Gordon? This is great- good use of imagery, slight humour and suspense. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh no this can't be good! And where's Gordon then? More tension very well written - looking forward to more x