Reviews for DP: Ghost Zone |
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CeleneTheAngel chapter 3 . 8/1/2018 Great story so far, but you never actually showed us Walked electrocuting Danny. Show don't Tell, man. Show don't tell. |
Susiex chapter 10 . 4/7/2018 Best story ever! I love it n.n |
katsss chapter 10 . 3/8/2018 OHMIGOSHHH, you have to finish this, and not in one last chapter, i mean, this needs to be continued! |
Feurrige chapter 10 . 9/29/2017 Can't wait to read, what Jack, Maddie and Dash are going to do, after what happend? Is Danny staying in his castle in the Ghost Zone? |
Ninja6345 chapter 9 . 9/19/2017 Really cool and interesting story. Would love to see what happens next. Very well written, in my opinion. |
XxSilverSPNxX chapter 8 . 5/21/2017 I love this so much! DxS! I hope you update soon. |
RedHeadsRock1010 chapter 2 . 1/30/2017 Interesting :) Just separate your text more and watch for run on sentences! |
OrangeWolf4 chapter 6 . 1/30/2017 This is amazing I hope you update soon. |
Cato Yugi chapter 6 . 1/30/2017 No Clockwork! |
FanficFan920 chapter 6 . 1/30/2017 Wow. You killed off Clockwork? Dang. |
Gamerbox chapter 5 . 9/25/2016 Great story keep it coming |
Can'tPickAName chapter 5 . 9/24/2016 Nice story, but you need to make your paragraphs shorter. 4 sentences long at the most. Nobody likes to read a wall of text! |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/24/2016 Pls update |
Papafrita361 chapter 5 . 9/21/2016 A mi no me pareció un capitulo horrible, en realidad, me gusto mucho. Y comparto el sentimiento de Sam, es decir, no entendí la mitad de lo que Danny dijo xD pero que mas da. No te desanimes y sigue esforzandote, recuerda que hay personas (como yo) que le gusta tu historia tanto que no les importa esperar algún tiempo por un capitulo. Que tengas un lindo día/tarde/noche, nos "leemos" luego |
gwencarson126 chapter 5 . 9/21/2016 AWESOME LOVE THIS DESIGN OF DANNY'S ROOM SO COOL |