Excellent

Wow, so true.

Well done for this. This was very well thought out and put together. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Now I am going to favourite it!

I'm not a huge fan of Jeff. I know, blaspheme, but I'm just not. HOWEVER, this Jeff, in this story. Him , I respect.

Good job.

Good story - Well written.

Pyre was right! I do love this! Another really really nice piece from you. Nicely introspective and an interesting look at the Tracy boys.

This was powerful and beautiful and just a gorgeous character study. Well done, thank you for writing it.

I can see why this was hard to write... you certainly choose hard things to write about. :P

This is a really well written, beautifully introspective piece.

You have a gift with words and with writing, did you know that?

One of the main reasons why I love reading and rereading any and all of your stories is because they are so real, and because of how you truly portray the characters. Not only that, but the subject matter in each of your stories actually gets me thinking deeply, and reflecting upon what I just read. It is enjoyable to read, and leaves me thinking; it really does. It's deep, yet simple, and of a hearty substance.
I particularly liked reading about Jeff's reflections upon each of the powers that the boys have, and Gordon's was my favorite. Being an optimistic person by nature, I can attest to the fact that there is a power in being positive, and even more so in making people smile...It is truly nice to read and realize that other people, (such as Jeff, or you as the writer) realize this as well. Thank you for that!
Thank you for continuously posting your stories! I love to read them. You're doing FAB-ulous!

Also, if I may...On another note...If I wrote off-anon, would you be opposed to giving some writing advice for a longer Thunderbirds story I'm thinking of writing?...I can't think of a better person to ask. If not, then that's okay. I wish you well, and a good day today! Happy writing!

Very nice. I liked it. Sometimes stories are hard to write and you have to delete and rewrite several times before you can be happy with how it sounds and how it reads. This to read is immensely easier then it seems was for you to write. Well done, I loved it. The power of each of our boys we see all the time and they make it look easy. A look inside is a different perspective and very well written. ;)

This was a very hard story to read ... as I was using my phone and my cat kept laying on the screen wanting affection. ;)

The story itself was great; a wonderful character study of our boys. I particularly like John's part because it is easy to forget how vital his role is. Nice job.