I'm really loving your story thus far! Can't wait for more! :D Amazing story!

Ok, I do like this so far and feel you've gotten the characters right for the most part. You've certainly gotten my attention for the next chapter. That said, the Snoke I met in the new movie would never say "please" to anyone, much less an inferior. I mean, the guy is evil incarnate, right? Would Satan say, "may I?"

I just don't understand. Why can't people understand there needs to be a balance! That is what Anakin Skywalker did. He brought balance to the force. Two Jedi, Two Sith.

And now they want to fuck that up again. History is only going to repeat itself...just wait. Hundreds of years after Rey is forced to murder Supreme Leader and Kylo, there will be another Anakin.

Why can't the two of them live together, in peace, in balance, and take over the galaxy together? Rebuild it together...

Well, shut. That was not what I thought the temple had in it. Interesting concept for a fic, can't wait for more.

I loved! Please, keep writing

This was a game changer, wasn't it? :) I can't wait to read more.

The Stormpilot makes me go weak in the knees. Gah it's so good!

Luke thinking they may have had sex using the word 'fucked' doesn't work. Get up the great work on the story. Can't wait to see where you take it next.

Fourth line from the bottom of the third section in parentheses-unnecessary. It's like you're throwing in info as the author and it's distracting us from the story's flow.
Your chapter is doing well until the last two sections. Are you feeling rushed? Take your time. Your piece is worth it.

Please! Remove the last line in parentheses in the first section of this chapter. It really does a disservice to the story and it's just too much information.
The last two lines in the scene where they are kissing under the waterfall-brilliant.
Fourth line from the end, "She knows she should not have slept with him." She didn't sleep with him, she fucked him. The dialogue says it all.
Great chapter but whatever happened to our slow burn?

What a novel way to introduce their first kiss! It had no romantic intentions whatsoever. I never thought of a kiss being used to show Rey his darkness. How clever!
Love the way you're using profanity to emphasize an emotional reaction without going overboard.
The interchange between Luke and Rey when she realizes he knew Kylo was coming-nice touch. It put 'Master' Luke on Snoke's level more than I'm used to seeing in a Reylo fic. It made me refer back to Kylo's earlier exchange with Snoke for a comparison between the two relationships. Keep up the great work!

Love your ending author's note. It made me laugh!

Yikes. That was just cold. ;)

I love the song story makes me think of "The Way (Pretty Girlby Sugarcult. I really enjoyed this chapter, and can't wait for more.

Wow. This is fun. Please don't keep us in suspense. I am enjoying this very much. Both the love/hate and very sexy relationship and the broader story. Thank you for writing, I am hungrily looking forward to more.