This is just wonderful for Beryl and Daisy!

So sweet. Guess Elsie wasn'T barren after all!

Awww, I'm a mess here! This is fabulous and you are brilliant as always! Thank you so much! I truly love this! Please keep going! xxx

Awww, I'm a mess here! This is fabulous and you are brilliant as always! Thank you so much!

Super proud of you as always, deary! So happy you wrote something Patmore/ daisy with our Elsie! Only been asking you forever! It melted my heart when I previewed but seeing it compelled made me tear up!

I love this Mother's Day story. Thank you!

Oh, please don't doubt yourself as a writer. This is just lovely. I believe this is a very plausible explanation of Daisy's past; why she's always waving off those who care for her. And I've always seen through all of Beryl's nagging and criticism to the heart underneath that sees Daisy as the daughter she never had. Thank you for this. It's beautiful in its simplicity.

Gosh how precious is this! What a lovely chapter. Just so lovely of Beryl. Xx

Omg .. It melted my heart !

Ohhhh my poor heart. This was absolutely, positively perfect in a heart-wrenching way. I love how you tied it in to Elsie's own yearnings, too - as well as her recognition of what the day meant for Daisy, but in a way that didn't take away at all from Beryl. I love the idea that Elsie was the one who yearned for a child, but when she was with Beryl and they found Daisy together that it was BERYL who took Daisy as her own. What a beautiful Mother's Day story. xxx