I just found your story and I am in love with it! I love your writing style and your characterization.

All I've got to say is OUCH!
Nothing like getting your butt kicked by someone you shot 3 times to shake your confidence.
This seems to be one of those ruthlessly selective training exercises, where those who survive go on and the ones that fail are buried.
It seems like the point of this exercise is to show how far the Widows have to go, (assuming they must become one of the prizraki) , if they survive.

Message to Interestedchild:
Usually I don't bother to respond to hate, but your review was so disgusting, hateful, and downright cruel. Obviously the author has been on hiatus, or has discontinued this story for some reason. I was a bit upset that it hadn't been updated, but when I checked out the reviews, what did I see? You, Interestedchild, who must be blissfully ignorant that some people have better things to do than troll on others' accounts. This is bullying. I think that the fact that you are a Guest account just shows how pathetic you are. At least have the courage to let the user see who is tormenting them. I hope that you get some sense and feel guilty. You should be ashamed of yourself. Have a good life!

Very enjoyable storytelling! Please continue and post soon!

Another great chapter! It really left me just as intrigued as last time. You always leave me wanting to know what is going to come next. I do really like how you write about different time periods so that we can see what characters have been through and have seen in the past to affect them in the future, as well as watching them grow. I'm loving all of the characters, and I am very impressed with your portrayal of Katiya. Thanks for the wonderful chapter, it really made my day to read it.

The dark overshadow is so amazing in your writing. There's a real and rawness in your writing that makes everything seem to come alive. The part with Anastasia, couldn't tell if that was my character or another with a similar name but still intense part of this chapter. And the train scene and fight was well written. Can't wait for more!

I submitted an OC, what can I do to make him better/accepted

This is an excellent chapter btw

This story is so morbidly fascinating...and also beautifully written. I'm intrigued to see where it will go, and I'm interested in submitting a character. You may hear from me.

Yay! Jade's there!

The only grammar errors I was were capitalization and sentence flow. And I think it was only in one sentence.

'Jade said, "they're here for graduation." '

"They're here for graduation," Jade said.

The second sentence flows a bit better. But everything else was great.

Hm...this is a very interesting story. I'll see if I can submit a character

This is stunning! I would love to send someone in!

This is terrific! Obviously I loved Nadia's part. I think you're capturing her perfectly so far. I can't wait to see more of how you write her, and what you have in store for her and the other characters. Liha has piqued my interest, so I'm excited to see more of her in the future.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

I really do like the concept of this story. I enjoy the fact that you are diving in the world of the Black Widows and how dark and messed up it was. If you want some inspiration, I would read The Origin of The Black Widow by The Black Shadowx. It delves into Natasha's childhood and it might give you some ideas.

Wow... That was pretty dark. Then again, the Red Room is pretty messed up. I really like your writing style—you described the hollowness, the emptiness of some of the lost violent souls there. Also, if you need inspiration, I would listen to T.S. Eliot's the Hollow Men. You can find a recording of it read by Eliot himself on YouTube. It's really good. Well, I look forward to the next chapter. Bye!

This was a very interesting chapter and idea. You really have a grasp on the darkness surrounding such a professions cause to be blunt and warped in how these girls deal with being in the Red Room. Though there were small grammar things, but otherwise you did a really good job of capturing the attention of your readers.
Also submitted!