Neat.

Bit of a characterization twist. The Ahsoka thing, and him going back on his philosophy about not killing simple thieves.
Tbh word of god should supersede canon. after 16 chapters should have just said "Ahsoka's a little AU, deal with it".

By far my favourite fan fic, I’m considering this how Star Wars actually went

Esta historia es una de las mejores que e leído te quedo increíble me encanto que fuera anisoka aunque me costo un poco la parte donde ahsoka empezó a matar, pero eso es una guerra y en la guerra hay muerte no veo que sea tan malo que mate también me pareció genial que anakin y ahsoka aprendieran todas las formas de combate jedi, bueno eso es todo espero que sigas escribiendo historias anisoka no importa las quejas de las personas con respecto a esta pareja siempre sera la mejor para mi

PD: Ya viste la temporada 7 de clone wars llore al final

I think this is one of my favs because Anakin tells Ahsoka how he feels

I am getting into this story late, but I just wanted to say it was amazing. I read the entire thing in three days. I don’t think that’s entirely healthy... thank you for writing this story, I enjoyed every aspect of it.

This is one of my favorite fanfictions! Before I read this story, I didn’t ship Anakin and ahsoka, but now I do. Wonderful writing except for a few grammar Mistakes and words Missed. Though, I often have the same problem. A sequel would be nice! Keep up the good work!

yes yes yes yes. Fives was the saddest ark in STARWARS. Thanks for changing it

Fun! It flowed organically from one changed choice. You did a Great job in taking this what if story to a well written conclusion. Thank you for the great story!

Although I am with Kreia in thinking that the Force (George) more than likely has some form of agency causing situations to form that don't make sense outside of the "powers that be" *coughgeorgecough* messing with the system. Anisoka is one of those pairings that always felt better than Padme and Anakin. Better writing is probably the main reason. George may have brought the concept and idea, but his writing without oversight is episode 1. I will always have a place in my heart for Star Wars.

Not really liking where the story is going. I think I'm gonna call it quits. For anyone who wants to read this, know that it's a well written fanfic with tons of original ideas and an interesting plot. It's just a tad too dark and Ahsoka is too much off character for me to enjoy. Not quite what I was looking for.

Anakin shouldn't be trying to change Ahsoka. He's forcing ber to change her morals and her beliefs. It's not pretty to read. Ahsoka has always been the upbeat and compassionate person. It really hits hard how shes forcing herself to not care about the people she kills after watching the final episodes of the clone wars. It just feels wrong in so many ways seeing her ruthless.

I just had a hilarious thought. Anakin is a bounty hunter with his Sith-like cloak. Imagine him gettinga job from Palpatine both of them have their heads slightly down and hoods covered by they recognize eachother voices:

"I want you to steal this holocron." Sidious Says.

Anakin on the other side of the line, "Chancellor?!"

PalpatineAnakin! Is that you my boy?"

AnakinHows it going!"

Both throw their hoods back and have a pleasant conversation and calling eachother twinsies.

What's the pairing? I feel like this might be an Anisoka story but he's already married to padme. I hope they are platonic, if not, then you should have made it so Anakin was never married just childhood friends with Padme.

What do you mean she's never taken a life. Are you joking, or ignorant? She killed trandosians when she was being hunted and DECAPITATED death watch mandalorians. She is already a survivor.

even after all this shit has gone down I still love the Padme and Ahsoka friendship