I just finished reading your fic on Tumblr, so I knew I had to favorite it on here! Beautiful smut, with plenty of emotions and romance to make it heartfelt. My only complaint is that you need to indent a few more paragraphs, particularly when dialogue is used. When two separate lines of dialogue (from two different people, that is) are in the same paragraph, it can be confusing for the reader, if only at first. But other than that (and that's just basic editing stuff), well done! :)

This was so amazing! It was really hot and I loved how emotional it was. I could really feel how much they missed each other and how they were nervous about not pushing each other too far. It was so great, thank you for sharing your story!

So hot

The ending was so cute! Great writing!

Not the biggest fan of this pairing but damn that was good.

I'm like awwww don't leave him

Nicely written! There were a few spelling errors, but nothing major. My biggest complaint would be that, while you gave a great amount of detail with the sex scene and communication and thoughts and all, I had no idea where they were. I was kind of surprised when I read "grass", as I had been picturing them on a sleeping mat lo. :P That extra little bit of detail would have been nice. Other than that, great. I'm happy to see a fellow smut writer lol ;)

a very intense reunion :)

Wow that is so hot romantic loving and sweet what a beautiful story best of all she got her hanyou. Thanks

Raven