Reviews for The Spiral Effect |
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Petrox chapter 4 . 5/16 too many changes of POV it gets tiring and confusing. |
fenixrojo36 chapter 4 . 1/31 z |
Terumi Gremory chapter 4 . 12/9/2019 Lol this story is amazing I love it very much and is that Yukikaze from taimanin asagi now that’s some good stuff and I found it hilarious that naruto did mention Edwin black went out like a bitch which makes sense. Hopefully we can see more funny stuff from him and perhaps more taimanin Asagi girls? Other then that keep up the good work. |
look2019 chapter 4 . 12/2/2019 Good Chapter. |
T-B-R chapter 4 . 12/3/2019 Angry Sona is hottest Sona~ |
narutoDkurosaki chapter 4 . 12/3/2019 Thanks for wasting my time buddy |
BigRig2.0 chapter 4 . 12/2/2019 I’m out |
Mr.Heller chapter 4 . 12/2/2019 A pity, this was pretty nice. |
Uzukaki chapter 1 . 12/2/2019 I'm hooked. I have no idea what Naruto's goals are but I'm enjoying the tone that has been set |
Thanatos 2018 chapter 4 . 12/1/2019 Is it writers block? |
Loquin chapter 3 . 11/7/2018 Good chapter! |
MemoryLabyrinth chapter 3 . 11/5/2018 This is one of the few actually interesting crossover fanfics out there with a plot that keeps you thirsting for more... 10/10...looking forward to the next chapter hope you update soon |
AsBsCs chapter 3 . 10/28/2018 It's pretty good man. Keep it up! |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/25/2018 Very good |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/24/2018 Ok i hate this story why because I hate that he do whatever he want like he own the place |