Definitely good story so far. Continue the way you're doing, this is interesting.

I'm curious to know what Arthur is hiding from his friend. And Gwen, he's your friend, why does your heart beat that way? ;) lol Tedric is going to get his for that one.

"I know this story is a bit slow-paced..." Uhh, nah not really. The action is coming, I'm pretty sure so take your time. It will be good too unless Gwen destroys her opponents quickly like the guy in the previous chapter. hehe

I liked the introduction here. Interested to see where this goes.

Keep it up. :)