This is going to get very interesting, very quick, and I'm excited to see what will happen with this mission they will be going on. Very nice work on this!

Can you please make some chapters about the new assassin's Creed Valhalla and can you make a charaeter simalur to eivor and also a antagonist like Alfred the great and give Riley an norsmen like ancestor. cause lynxs are native to Norway and put the hidden ones and the order of ancients in as well please.

Put some assassin's Creed Valhalla iand give Riley an Norsemen like ancestors please. and make a chareter similar to eivor from the new game and put an Alfred the great like chareter in as well. and make some of the future chapter settings similar to the English kingdoms in the game like wassex, East anglia and north thumbria and Norway please.

Once again I was surprised that this updated. Another great chapter and I liked the backstory how he joined. Also nice idea about hybrids. I can't wait to see how this all unfolds.

I'm not sure if a beaver and skunk hybrid is even possible, and nick and Judy having kids is definetly impossible without extremely advanced tech or magic. Otherwise I like tying in hybrids with the assassins and peices of Eden. Hopefully we get more backstory on why Riley joined the assassins such as what happened the first time? How did the others die? What did Riley's time with them entail? Etc.
Hope to see the next chapter soon!

Cool... Way good :3

Glad to see it got updated

Please make chapter about ac Valhalla please cause I'm a long time assassin's Creed fan and also my ancestors were Vikings.

I love this story, which is why I'm going to give constructive criticisms. This chapter was great but there is a problem. When the templars came in to take Valarie away it doesnt make sense why Judy and Nick would have to rescue her. Valarie is not a minor so she ultimately decides if she wants to stay under police protection or not as there is legal recourse for the templars to force her. Bogo also could have simply called her parents in his check to expose how the templars were not sent by them. This would allow him to arrest them for fraud due to the forged documents, which would habe been a greater blow than just temporarily knocking them out. Another thing that gets really annoying is how you keep repeating that the end goal of the two organization is the same but the methods are what differ. Another problem with that is that it's not really true. It would be like saying the Nazi's goal of a perfect world is the same as a secular, xenophillic, and democratic government's version. The Templars new world order involves extreme Authoritarianism running everything while the Assassins is a Democratic Society that has bettered itself by learning through trial and error and very lose guidance. The means make the end. In fact the Templars by definition are a cult, it is confirmed by Steven Hassan's BITE model and other international models. Besides the errors listed, its a wonderful story with good character interactions, lore, mystery, it gets the audience invested, etc. Hopefully in the next chapter you post Judy and Nick will learn one of the most important lessons you can learn as a police officer: the system you uphold is flawed. While the Templars probably dont have enough influence anymore to stop Hart from being convicted, they are likely to be able to get him off with a light sentence or even a slap on the wrist, have him placed in minimum security where they can easily break him out, or just have him disappear before he is convicted.

not bad not bad at all but can you put some assassin's creed valhalla in it please

More chapters please

The ram is a kwie of new Zealander the pig in Chinese the rabbit is a Brit the cape Buffalo is a Zimbabwen and the elephant is south African. Riley and Val are Canadian Cuben because there mum was born in Havana and dad was born in British Columbia thay both meet at universal in zootopia in the late 60s to early 1971 riley and Val where probley born before Nick in the late 80s and Judy in the early 90s Riley the oldest Val is a year yonger so Riley was born 1976 and Val was born in 77 witch would make them in there late 30s to Early 40s. Nick is in his mind 30s and Judy in her late 20s but that would make Riley and Val's parents in there late 60s mostly between 65 to 69 and so that my review about this chapter I'm quite popular in the fanfiction community for my reviews and little storys
oh and buy the way make more chapters for AC zootopia because I'm a massive AC fan I can't what for AC Ragnarok to be anoust by Ubisoft at E3 2020 so take care.

more chapters pleas

can you give the templars backstorys like is arlyss is south african kazim is egyptian florence is australian and wesley is canadian and give them places of birth like arlyss is from johannesburg and karim is from alexandria egypt becuse he is a striped hyena and florence is form sydney and wesley is from vancouver bc

Not bad but arlyss marvrick is not just the templar grandmaster he also the first South African Templar I've seen because the Templars had stronghold's in Johannesburg cape Town and Durban but zootopia was the first stronghold before the South African ones