this story lacks charm

Please update soon

Absolutely not a fan of buggy joining , I actually think it kinda sucks

Good start

I hope you continue this story its amazing!

Update soon

Hi
I see you haven’t updated this story in a while but another of your stories has been. I do hope you’ll continue this story. It’s very good.
Thanks

Sorry ,but this is trash , smh !

I’m excited , this should be good , I never read a Yami Yami no mi Luffy story before and also you gave Luffy griffin which is pretty sick , also the first fix with no straw hat , I hope it delivers

Very, very interesting story. A pity it hasn't been continued yet, but it will be placed on my favorite and follow list, and I sincerely hope this story will be continued. And I also somewhat hope that Luffy will recruit a few other interesting characters, like Gin for example.

Me gusta es bien interesante

Shoudl continue this story its it's good.

update this please

Oh yeah. And space on a ship is premium, and the waves make most beds worthless.. Triple hammocks were the go to for quarters. While the captain did have a bed. But beds back then were basically a mattress suspended by rope.

Three bathrooms?...sure in your fantasy land. How bout electricity too? And showers and baths. U know whAt? Let's just use all the fresh water up.

Ugh. At least if u r going to add such weaklings...while saying its luffy responsibility to ensure the safety of his crew...then have them fucking trained...at least a bit...to get out of civilian power level .