Reviews for The Next Adventure Forward
crimson hearts chapter 7 . 2/21
hope to read more soon
crimson hearts chapter 7 . 7/11/2019
i admit they seemed a bit to grown up for children but oh well. im just hoping to read more of them being older.
Addie Lover of Stories chapter 7 . 3/17/2019
Okay, I absolutely love this story! Seeing Harry grow up with a happy childhood on Asgard is just lovely, and I just love seeing more of that world! Plus I love how you've built the relationships in this story, and I'm really excited to see where you take this! Thank you so much for writing this!
dreaddragonknight chapter 7 . 2/23/2019
I was half expecting for Helen to pull a Monty Python on Thor with the rabbit
dreaddragonknight chapter 6 . 2/22/2019
ooohhhhh that kind of crack, most interesting
dreaddragonknight chapter 5 . 2/22/2019
that was hilarious to read
dreaddragonknight chapter 4 . 2/22/2019
a good intro, though her maturity seems to be a tad inconsistent. Loving Frigga
dreaddragonknight chapter 3 . 2/22/2019
that is adorable but i also have no idea how old mentally they are supposed to be
dreaddragonknight chapter 2 . 2/22/2019
ok that was really sweet, but how much is Helen affect by her biology as she is an infant?
dreaddragonknight chapter 1 . 2/22/2019
how many idiots tried to take her on, during her time?
ThaisVahia chapter 7 . 1/14/2019
I thought the bunny would go Monty Python and the Holy Grail style
tamashiyuki chapter 7 . 1/12/2019
Very goood!
mayawene chapter 7 . 8/13/2018
Hope Helen will take care of Sif soon
Sliver Crystal of Tokyo-Moon chapter 7 . 8/7/2018
Please update new chapters
Guest chapter 7 . 7/23/2018
Hi

Hoffe das deine Geschichte mal weiter gehen tut.
Sonst nicht schlecht

Schau :-) :-)
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