Very sweet and plausible. Nice work!

I liked your story. I wanted more, I wanted to know what was done to poor Illya by those creeps! Great writing!

Very well done and spot on. Wish I had written this!

nice story

Loved it! I've always wanted more h/c from that scene. I only wish your fic was longer!

Hey there! I always was disappointed at how the episode just left this part to the imagination. Thanks for bringing it to life! Somehow you captured Napoleon's sensitivity toward that moody Russian.
Can't wait to see what else you write!

I just watched this episode yesterday, and your scene should have been in it! I had read your story once before watching it...then after actually seeing the episode, I missed your scene! It would have added so much! From one MFU newbie to another: BRAVO! Hugs!

This was a great little story! The guys seemed in-character to me, and you added just the right amount of feels (for my taste anyway) without going overboard. Awesome job!️

Well, I enjoyed your story very much and hope to read more from you!

Hello. For some reason, I put off reviewing until I had a chance to read it a second time. The first time I read it I was a little irritated at you for writing such a fabulous story...the story I wanted to write ...and I think doing it much better than I would probably have done it.

I am fairly new as a fan of Napoleon and Illya, but I have seen all of series one, two and three, and some of series four, and in case these other reviews haven't convinced you yet, you have the characterisations absolutely spot on.

As for your name, whether that was intended as a jab at your own skills or simply as a joke, take it from me Zelldefinitely CAN write!

I would love to be useful and give you something constructive to work on...but I can't. A perfect job so far. Now I am tempted to take a peek at some of your other work...very well done indeed
Lilidelafield

Welcome to the fandom, it's always nice to see new MFU writers. As a first effort, you've hit on the most endearing quality of the show: the friendship between these two characters. That element holds everything together.

I liked it. Write more!

Welcome to the MFU fandom! Great story covering the missing scene. I think you hit the characters spot on and I hope you write many more stories!

If you hadn't admitted to being new to the fandom, I wouldn't have been able to tell. I think you pretty much nailed their characters. This is an excellent introduction - looking forward to more stories from you. Check out the fandom at livejournal ( ) and Archives of Our Own ( /)

This was perfection.