| Reviews for Demon Within |
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   LilMissPinkChink chapter 1 . 4/19/2019 I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you. :) |
| CanzetYote chapter 1 . 12/24/2018 I have some questions about this scene: "He stared into her eyes, tears trickling down his muzzle." 1. When Rodolphus cried, did his tears specifically trickle down: A: The bridge of his muzzle and onto the tip of his nose as he hung his head or B: The side of his muzzle diagonally and onto his lower jaw and chin 2. Exactly how would Rodolphus react and what would he say to me if I hugged him, rubbed his back and licked those tears trickling down his muzzle with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Rodolphus' muzzle. 3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Rodolphus' tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his muzzle? 4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears trickling down Rodolphus' muzzle? I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back! |
| wolfkitty1103 chapter 1 . 7/11/2018 I'm not a fan or reader of this pair usually, but this was a great little story. I really enjoy how you bring in other characters that are often not included since they aren't a part of a pairing. Thanks for writing! |
| WritinginCT chapter 1 . 5/14/2018 Really interesting ‘verse! |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 1 . 2/10/2018 Well done. |
| laumirot chapter 1 . 8/8/2017 Love it! |
| Lucyole chapter 1 . 12/5/2016 really cool oneshot i liked it. |
| roon0 chapter 1 . 11/23/2016 Beautiful story. Thank you for sharing. |
| Rubyia chapter 1 . 11/21/2016 So sweet... |
| HAB63 chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 Great story. Thanks for sharing. |
| QueenVulca chapter 1 . 5/15/2016 Wow. just wow. this story really blew me away. the theme was fantastic. great job. |
| djhay4 chapter 1 . 5/5/2016 Sigh. Your stories make me so happy! |
| twztdwildcat chapter 1 . 4/30/2016 Another excellent story! It was sitting in my tabs for a few days forgotten until I went to make room! My bad. So is this a one shot? If so its not marked as complete. I think further chapters could be interesting but you covered their story so well it's not particularly needed. Unless you'd like to torture Ron. Feel free to write epic sagas about torturing that idiot! Hehehe :) guess my inner demon wants to play. Oh and you incorporated one of my favorite poems beautifully into the ending there. Fits in perfectly! |
| TimeyWimeyBadWolf chapter 1 . 4/26/2016 Woah. A bit of a funky conglomeration of ideas all mashed into a delightful read. Nice job. |
| ChiffonShock chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 Loved this! |
