fyi pregnancy tests are recommended to be done in the morning, using the first sample of urine that accumulates during the night.

This story was so amazing. I really want to find out whether this baby survives or not now.

Amazing story! Very emotional! I really enjoyed it!

So glad you wrote this after giving us Ava - made it a bit easier on the heart! Love this version of Jeller and this future you've given them.

So sweet and beautiful. You have a gift.

More please! Love it

Will you write story where Jane is giving birth to her baby it would amusing to read how Kurt would react.

So I've read this story about five different times, trying to sit down and write a response to it. And it's hard. Because there is just so much I love about this, so much I could just endlessly list, but that's no fun to read, and not very helpful, either.

I think, again, what I keep coming back to when I read this is the heightened moments of emotion in it—and not just Jane's panic, as discussed earlier, or Kurt's trepidation and their eventual... "Joy" is too strong a word, but perhaps hope? Their eventual hope, there at the end? So yes, while all those things are very strong, I still think what I love most is the moment between him and her at the kitchen table. Not simply because it's cute and flirty, and because I can so imagine S & J in their places, but because I just love the way the emotion is so overpowering there. It seems like a normal moment—on the surface, perhaps, it is a normal moment—but more than that, it's also a moment of fear and guilt and relief and thankfulness, and I love that you wrapped that all together in just a small little space. I don't know, I just really loved it! I thought it was a beautiful little scene, and it was nice to see that even as Jane's falling apart and starting to drown in guilt, holding Kurt and having him next to her still grounds her and calms her. I think it says a lot about their relationship, their marriage, and how far they've come and how far they'll be able to go.

Kind of randomly tacking onto that, I was kind of pleasantly surprised by the number of times J & K had sex in this. Just thinking about their background, what they've only just come out of, makes all those moments really powerful (at least to me), because you know just a few months ago or just a year ago they wouldn't even be thinking of sex, let alone actually having it. And seeing how they are cautious or sweet or desperate for one another, at different turns, is just rather lovely, because while they still carry scars from what they've been through, they've also clearly been able to patch things up, both physically and emotionally.

I also have to note, I really liked your small inclusion of Sarah in here. I would love to see more of her inserted in this time period, and the time periods before. I really like imagining Jane leaning on her, perhaps out of convenience, perhaps out of necessity (b/c what do Tasha and Patterson know about being married, or pregnant, or losing a child?), and I love that they can kind of grow into friends and sisters through these traumas, as horrible as they are. You're making me want to write more Sarah again! :)

Again, I really love how you reworked the scene where she tells Kurt. I think it is so much more real this time around, and hits home so much harder. The "You know you could've told me, Jane," line still gets me, still stings, and I think that's what's wonderful about it. She knows this, he knows it, and yet—she still couldn't do it. But she managed in end, and that was what was needed. Also the "Always worried about everyone but yourself" hurt me, but it's so wonderful: cuts right to the quick, and shows so much of Jane—and so much of all that Kurt knows of her.

I think this all just turned out perfectly. I loved it, and I'm so glad to see it up! Fantastic job. :))

So perfect!
Love it

Once again you have written a superb story , you can't help but feel for them both as they struggle with the news of Janes pregnancy. Having read both of the other two stories it is good to know that they eventually get a happy ending. What I particularly like with this is that it is Jellow and not Joscar as it is that direction that the show is taking the storyline at present (Sorry folks I am not a fan of Oscar as I still feel that he has his own secret agenda.)
Would love to read further stories in this series if you can come up with some.

Incredible. Astoundly beautiful and perfectly poetic. I loved this, so full of emotion and heartbreak with a happy ending. I would love to see them through the entire pregnancy. Xx

This story is so sad, but so good!